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person smint45
schedule June 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was absoloutly fantastic!!!1 Such a great chappie!!! Although the killing the cln did wasn't it had to be done!!! And its hard to understand that this nice Evan is going to be the monster we saw a few chappie ago!!! I really don't want to know what happens nex but anyway till next time and the showdown will begin!!!!
person RachelB
schedule June 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I can honestly say that I was so gone I don't even know how I managed to read...let alone reply....XD I'm hardcore like that....I do 6 shots of jager and read awesome stories...fner fner...

As much as I'm looking forward to the next chapter I'm also not...I don't wanna see Felix dieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee lol...
But I'll still read it cause you sur...are epic.... :P
person Anon Omous
schedule June 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Alright, I like Felix and all and his past is interesting but...it's getting a tad redundant and bland. When will we be getting back to the story itself and out of flashback mode???
person Malachi2223
schedule June 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Faith was awesome and Conrad was so dangerously cool with that voice of his!

I'm glad that Felix is taking the time to show Nicoli how things really work with the clan. You can say 'kill or be killed' but until you see it, it's not really real. I know that Felix is doing this to show Nicoli, but I think he's also doing it to protect Ethan and the others who have become attached to Nicoli, even Conrad. It would probably hurt them if Nicoli freaked out and started calling them all killers and monsters the first time he sees them really defending themselves. I'm glad that Felix is doing this for them.

I'm ready for this dream sequence to be over though. I hope this next chapter will see the end of this and bring them back to real time...especially since I hoping for that hug between Felix and Nicoli! LOL!
schedule June 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ok I'm liking Faith more and more. The more I read about her the more she reminds me of Amelia. No wonder they got along so well. They both protect the ones they love by any means. I know it's going to break my heart when Evan kills Felix, because I actually like him in Felix's memories. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Great chapter and the story of course is awesome!
person mystic
schedule June 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Frist off let me say sorry for not reviewing in a long time. Now let me just say FAITH IS FUCKING AWESOME!!!!!! love the chapter great work as always and yes you guessed it i'm so looking forward to the next chapter.
person Malachi2223
schedule June 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was great...so heart warming. It hurt to see Felix struggling to know how to be loved, but it was so gratifying to see him finally let go of his terrible hurts from the past and begin to live. I hope when this journey to the past is over that the first thing Nicoli does is hug Felix.

More more more please!
schedule June 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Felix story breaks my heart but it's wonderful to see how open the clan was to him and welcoming him as part of their family.
person BlueFishie
schedule June 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I feel so bad because I haven't reviewed the last two chapters. I admit that I've been skimming through them (even though I know they're important) because I know the end of this part isn't going to have a happy ending. I have to admit, if I know something is gonna have a sad ending I usually don't spend too much time on it, simply because I'm too emotional for my own good. Every time I see something good happen when I'm skimming it just makes me sad. Though I do like the Nicoli/Felix interaction, even if I'm still not a big Felix fan.
person smint45
schedule June 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I totly missed chappie 63 sorry!!! Now I'm going to give you a double review!!!
That was totally fantastic!!! Conrad and Garvin and cora and all the others a so sweet back then!!! I really don't want to know what happend for all of them to becomee so sad and depresse!!! And I totally don't want to know this event with Conrad and the humans!!! I probably have to know anyway but I just got a very bad feeling!!! I'm now going to read the newest chappie!!! See you again!!!!