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June 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh i can't for what happens next! What will Nicoli do next time he see's Ethan? I mean after all that he has to see Ethan diffrently now.
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June 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
good chapter i liked it quite a lot and im soooo going to (if he was real) kill even that stupid arse god he so stupid that he thinks that ethen has the self delisions when along it is him! i fell rely rely bad for fait i mean she had it a lot worse i think then any one i mean people had thir loved one killed while hers was the killer.... makes it worse i suppose well good chapter and i did like the little saga but i am glad to get back to the main story again well thanks for the good story and keep up the well the best damn original vamp story around, oh and i have to ask you this.... (i love Buffy fiction a lot and i LOVE xanderXspike or xanderangle, do you?)
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June 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm gonna cry...I know I'm gonna cry....how could you just end it thereeeeeeeeeeeeee -_-
If I didn't adore you so much I'd probably want to punch you for that lol
I just sat here and read this whole chapter with my cat biting my toes and ankles...good times yo...
But I loved it even if I did almost cry X_X
If I didn't adore you so much I'd probably want to punch you for that lol
I just sat here and read this whole chapter with my cat biting my toes and ankles...good times yo...
But I loved it even if I did almost cry X_X
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June 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I can not wait for the next chapter, i know what will happen but i keep hoping something will magically happen and Ethan and Felix will wake in an alternate universe where Felix never got killed.
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June 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was heartbreaking. I can only imagine the pain he clan went through. It's like Evan is two different people, like a split personality. I know what's coming up is going to be sad but I am definitely anxious to read it. I want to see how the clan reacts to Felix's death and Evan's betrayal. I have to say, Nicoli is a strong one to sit through these memories and experience them. I don't know if I could handle all of this. It's so captivating yet hard, I love stories like this that just grabs me and doesn't let me go. Great writing!
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June 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I'm waaaaaaaay overdue for a comment and I'm very sorry this will be short... (probably) I'll sens you a larger comment (if you want) on LJ.
First I'm reading every chapter! I told you I wasn't really reading at the time when Nicoli eneded up with Dimitri. I'll be returning there in a few days and re-read it so I know what that bastard told Nicoli (I skipped that part). I was very woried you would go over the top with the story so I waited to see if something like that happens (I can explain on LJ if you're interrested what I was worried about). I must say you did wonderful thing with the plot and I could easily read on. I should have known you won't do something like that and now I feel a little foolish. And I'm sorry for doubting you.
I should have let you know that I liked the story after the chapter where Nicoli was rescued.
And now the Ghost saga. :) Felix seems different here and I mean the ghost Felix not the alive one. He's a lot more friendly with Nicoli, you can be fooled into thinking that Felix actually likes Nicoli more than he lets on. And that he shares his memories whit him so freely. That must be hard for him and to do it just like that only to tell his own story... I'm confused here, need a few more re-reads and a lot more thinking. Although I know that's the best opportunity for the reader to know about Felix's past and show the whole clan more, whit those vaampires that were killed on Dimitri's whim. I like the saga, but with every new chapter I'm finding myself more and more reluctant to read the chapter where Felix dies. I'll be crying while reading it, I just know. I know Evan will probably say some very interesting things but knowing how it will end... :( I was kinda taken aback when Felix said that he was seventeen when he died. I though he was older. His age makes his death more tragic. Makes me hate Evan more and more. I'm really dreading your next chapter and I'm wondering if I'll find the courage to read it...
On a more happy level, you got me intrigued with that Samuel character (or what he's name was). My perverted mind went off and started pairing him with Nicoli the moment Felix explained who he was. :D
Oh! I remembered. That EthanxConrad thing. It was hot and totally unexpected for me! I never would have guessed that the bond between sire and fledling goes into sex too. Hmm... Nicoli being Gavin's fledling.... hm... *grins* Yum, yum. XD
... I think I can't write a short comment even if I'll wanted to....
I was wondering also how will Nicoli react when he finally finds out who hired Omen... That's a scene I really like to visualize. Recently I started to picture Nicoli's parents walk in on Ethan and Nicoli although it's kind of hard to do so knowing that Ethan can hear their heart beats. :/ And I also entertaining myself with a scene where that THING that haunts Nicoli comes and the clan and the witches must rescue Nicoli again... I like to picture Felix playing a greater part in it since he's a ghost.
Remembered something else. Ethan poked himself with his fangs? Was that even possible? Well, it was hilarious to read but I thought that Blood Rage the vampires fell into when turned ensured that when they finally come out of it they don't go bitting themselves. XD
Okay, I'm out os ideas for now. :) ... short.... It's oficial. I can't do short....
I'll be here dreading the next chapter. ;)
First I'm reading every chapter! I told you I wasn't really reading at the time when Nicoli eneded up with Dimitri. I'll be returning there in a few days and re-read it so I know what that bastard told Nicoli (I skipped that part). I was very woried you would go over the top with the story so I waited to see if something like that happens (I can explain on LJ if you're interrested what I was worried about). I must say you did wonderful thing with the plot and I could easily read on. I should have known you won't do something like that and now I feel a little foolish. And I'm sorry for doubting you.
I should have let you know that I liked the story after the chapter where Nicoli was rescued.
And now the Ghost saga. :) Felix seems different here and I mean the ghost Felix not the alive one. He's a lot more friendly with Nicoli, you can be fooled into thinking that Felix actually likes Nicoli more than he lets on. And that he shares his memories whit him so freely. That must be hard for him and to do it just like that only to tell his own story... I'm confused here, need a few more re-reads and a lot more thinking. Although I know that's the best opportunity for the reader to know about Felix's past and show the whole clan more, whit those vaampires that were killed on Dimitri's whim. I like the saga, but with every new chapter I'm finding myself more and more reluctant to read the chapter where Felix dies. I'll be crying while reading it, I just know. I know Evan will probably say some very interesting things but knowing how it will end... :( I was kinda taken aback when Felix said that he was seventeen when he died. I though he was older. His age makes his death more tragic. Makes me hate Evan more and more. I'm really dreading your next chapter and I'm wondering if I'll find the courage to read it...
On a more happy level, you got me intrigued with that Samuel character (or what he's name was). My perverted mind went off and started pairing him with Nicoli the moment Felix explained who he was. :D
Oh! I remembered. That EthanxConrad thing. It was hot and totally unexpected for me! I never would have guessed that the bond between sire and fledling goes into sex too. Hmm... Nicoli being Gavin's fledling.... hm... *grins* Yum, yum. XD
... I think I can't write a short comment even if I'll wanted to....
I was wondering also how will Nicoli react when he finally finds out who hired Omen... That's a scene I really like to visualize. Recently I started to picture Nicoli's parents walk in on Ethan and Nicoli although it's kind of hard to do so knowing that Ethan can hear their heart beats. :/ And I also entertaining myself with a scene where that THING that haunts Nicoli comes and the clan and the witches must rescue Nicoli again... I like to picture Felix playing a greater part in it since he's a ghost.
Remembered something else. Ethan poked himself with his fangs? Was that even possible? Well, it was hilarious to read but I thought that Blood Rage the vampires fell into when turned ensured that when they finally come out of it they don't go bitting themselves. XD
Okay, I'm out os ideas for now. :) ... short.... It's oficial. I can't do short....
I'll be here dreading the next chapter. ;)
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June 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OK...I officially hate you! If I didn't want to know what happens so badly I would refuse to read any more! It's all because you're mean!
That's all I have to say for now. :(
That's all I have to say for now. :(
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June 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i fell so bad for faith loveing that mean stupid bastard i rely want to know what was in it for him i mean what was it that made ethan change so much not all of it could have just been bitterness could it? well i cant wait for this little saga to end as much as i love it and all i want to get back to the present and see whats foing to happen next
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June 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
that is why i love fait my friend! who would win a fight canrad or gavin? lol well the chapter was good and it did a very good thing by makeing nicole understand that death will happen and its not going to be kittens and rainbows on the journey for the hearts lol well cant wait for the next update have a good one :)
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June 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I wish i had a time machine so i can go into the future and see the future awesome chapters you will write! Keep them coming!