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Waaaaah! I hope you update soon! It's been almost a month. I'm ready for some present time action baby! Gosh, I sound greedy! Work as slow as you need to for the story though.

I hope all is well for you!

And I've been collecting songs that remind me of the characters for some reason. I've thought about sending them to you as a mix, but I'm afraid that the songs wouldn't match well when you hear them.

You've got me addicted. I feel twisted because I'm so into this story. I blame you. For everything.

I really love Moonlight Denial, but most of the story seems to be about the Vampires and their problems. I really would like to finally get to the bottom of what's happening with Nicoli and the voice in his head. Is this by any chance going to be a sequel or something?

wow i cried in that chapter! poor felix! can we give him a ghostie-lollipop or something?

oh god girl, you are really good at making me cry. so now we know felix's story, nicoli's safe, i think it's time to get back to the Hearts, or at least Nicoli's mysterious past! update soon *kisses*

I cannot believe that I have read through 68 chapters and am as excited as I am about what's to come next. That amazes me. I am going to be a frustrated, agitated mess until you update this story. I cried all through Felix's memories. This story has me on the edge of my seat. Every chapter, every paragraph. Fantastic work. Keep up the good job. It deserves an ending. (Plus I am WAY curious about Nicoli's nightly tormentor and pain in the eye.)

Sorry I didn't review the last couple chapters. This one made my chest hurt. But I'm kind of happy that we are going to get back to the regular story line. (sorry lol) I do feel a bit more connected to Felix now. I'm wondering if Nicoli and Felix are going to be a lot closer because of all of this. I hope so. I think the only real reason I disliked Felix is because he didn't like Nicoli.

You're giving me a lot of firsts. First main character that I've actually liked, female characters I didn't find annoying, be sticking through more than ten chapters...

And I just got over being sick. It's like a present for a new chapter. Even if it was sad.

The Ghost saga came to an end. I'll miss the living Felix. He was so sweet.
I'm surprised, you know. It wasn't that hard to read this chapter. At east it was easier than I thought it would be. Of course you did bring me to cry at some point. I don't know at what point. I was reading so intently and with so much dedication that I barely noticed. Well, I needed a tisue so that made me notice. XD I reread it today and this time I teared up in two places. First right after Felix’s hand fell limply to the floor when he died and the second when the clan came, at the moment Andre said the comment about his poor Kitten. By the way. I really like Andre’s story how he ended with the clan. :) A thief! Ha! XD
Now I know how screwed Evan is. He has a serious problem with himsels and way to many complexes. And that mother... It’s a good thing that Ethan’s the way he is with a mother like that. He’s father must have been a great guy. One thing hit me and I was wondering. Ethan and Evan. They are twins. Did Conrad turn them together? If not then did he wait for the first to go out of the Blood Rage before he turned the other? And was Evan really so depending on Ethan that he went with him and became a vampire? It would seem that now we more or less know how the vampire became vampires but we still don't know how it was with Ethan and Evan. I'm very curious about that. Evan thought that Ethan was a monster so why did he go with him and became a vampire? I know that vampires aren't really evil, at least not in a wicked way but I'm surprised that Evan didn't think that becoming a vampire will make Ethan even more a monster that he already was in his eyes. Do I even make sense here? I'm starting to wonder...
And Evan with the way he killed his father with such cold blood really fits to be Dimitri's child more than Conrads. Conrad didn't know about the darkness that Evan had inside him from the start. Insanety is truly a powerful weapon.
Evan's most presious, sacred treasure. I don't even want to know... What goes in that monster's head... But I'm really curious as well. :) Although I don’t really want to see Nicoli anywhere near Meier again I’m hoping we will find out what that treasure was that he was talking about. And as you can see I'm thinking that Nicoli will be the one that finds out. XD If you even plan to tell us, readers what it is. Everyone must be asking you that, right. XD After this chapter I think that Ethan took his recent encounter with his brother rather well. Considering that Meier almost pushed Ethan into suicide.
Newborn ghost don't have much power. It grows with time. Here is my imagination running wild. If that creature that is haunting Nicoli in his dreams a ghost it must be a relly old one to be so strong. such great power it posesses... I'm also considering the opsibility that that creature went beyond being a ghost to being something else more powerful and pure evil. Ghosts like to hang around cemeteries, right? Even if I'm wrong I'm passing time until we will see that creature again. ;)
Felix was surprised that Nicoli has watched everything. I have a bad feeling that Nicoli was subjected to watching horror movies by that creature he doesn’t remember about. His dreams can give a vague image of it seeing what happens to him in them.
One more thing (sorry, I'm babbling so much...). Even killed Felix with such cold blood but he is a vampire and they kill humans so that's not really something that I can hold agains him although he could have just killed Felix and not torture him. That made him a monster in my eyes. And that he pretended to like him and everybody else. Dimitri is a evil genius...
You know at the very begining after I read the chapter I though that Even wanted Felix and that was what Ethan took away from him but it's kind of silly, isn't it? My imagination is running very wild.
That's all. XD I liked this chapter as much as the rest of the story and I'll be waiting for more.
I'll be having a surprise for you. It should be finished tomorow. ;)

awwwww poor Felix...and poor Ethan and poor Faith...and Nicoli and everyoneeeeee...I should beat you like a redheaded stepchild for that...
But I won't cause I want more story...

Felix is Ethan's strength. It's so sad that their relationship could never be explored any further as lovers but it seems that they found an even stronger bond beyond lovers. It takes a strong "ghost" to allow someone to go out and still seek out love. I wonder if deep down Felix is happy that Nicoli is there for Ethan in ways he know he can't be. Although it must be hard, I guess this is what is meant by wanting the other person to find love again. I grieve for Felix and Ethan's relationship as lovers but I am happy that Ethan has been able to feel something for Nicoli.
I wonder if Evan feels like Ethan tried to take Faith from him in some way? I wonder if that is what he was getting at. I don't know. Evan is so damaged. It's funny the way the "evil" vampires want everyone to believe that they believe that they are doing what is right and they feel they have to do what they are doing. They are filled with so much hatred, especially Dimtri and Evan, that you have to wonder why. It seems that they haven't always been that way so something must have happened.
I'm actually excited to get back to Nicoli's story and his mysterious eye/headache problems. What is this spirit/person calling out to him?
Don't worry...I'm with MD for the long haul, I'm not going any where. This story is just that good!

Yay! Felix stopped Ethan before he did something stupid and irreversible! I'm glad the flashbacks are over now. They were informative, but I want to see what will happen now between Nicoli and the clan now that he knows their past. I can't wait to see how they interact now.

*does happy dance* Felix held Nicoli when he was crying AND they touched foreheads just like Felix and Ethan did at the end of the visions! I'm so terribly happy now! Thank you for the sweet moments between them...it made it all worthwhile!