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person BlueFishie
schedule September 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What is this! I don't even! You were definitely right about something starting! Now you've got me all excited. And car sex. Yus. I believe that I could read quite a bit about that.

I kind of had a feeling that something like this would be about Nicoli. Seriously exciting. Cliffhangers cliffhangers. I think I need to you write faster. Not want. Need.

I also really like this chapter. Things get rolling pretty well. And the CAR. I have uber loves for you right now.

And I'm sorry my song list isn't done yet. I have no good excuse. I started playing the Sims games again and they're eating my life.

Now excuse me while I go reread the chapter.

* literally had to refresh the captcha for like a minute and a half to get one that I could read *
schedule September 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I squealed when I saw this update. I'm dying here to read more. And DAMN IT I WANT TO KNOW WHY NICOLI HAS THAT AURA!! Lol. You're keeping me on the edge of my seat. T-T Please update...

I'm curious though. How soon do you think we're going to have to wait before the evil thingy comes into play?
schedule August 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I can read MD again! Yay! ^-^ I missed you so much… ;)
Yeah, well... This chapter was short but I didn't mind. :) I liked it anyway. And good to know that you found a bit time to give it to us. ;P You know what's the most shocking after reading this chapter? That Felix tried to move on... without telling Ethan what he wanted to do. But if he was suffering so much then I can't blame him, I suppose. Hmm... I'm also not sure if I want Nicoli and Ethan to fall in love with each other. That would be the most natural thing to do for them (and the story) and all and I wouldn't mind it if it happened. The only problem to arise when that happens would be Nicoli's mortality (I don’t want Ethan to get hurt again because Nicoli’ll die from old age or something ;) or do you plan to do something to him and make him immortal? The influence of the Hearts perhaps? When they finally find them. XD Or maybe becoming a vampire after all? :) *makes dreamy eyes* Or that Dream Guy doing something when he finally shows up?
Conrad’s hurt more than he lets on if he blames human nature for the grief... It's sad that meddling of his brother made him so distant to humans. I hope Nicoli will be able to help with that. :) But I should stick to this chapter's event and not go all over the place. XD
Now I'm thinking of Nicoli making a wish with the hearts to help Ethan fall in love again. XD But that’s kinda boring of my part… Hm… The ghost saga came to an end and now I’m wondering what will all of them do now. Will the Nicoli in the name of the clan and himself ask Amelia to help read that book? XD I have mixed feelings about something like that happening. I don’t think that he would want for Amelia to get involved in such a dangerous adventure but they need to find out where the heart is so… they’ll probably need Amelia. And I also don’t think that just telling Amelia to open the book would be enough for her to do it. They would need to explain a bit (or a lot ;) and Conrad would be rather reluctant to do it. :P
My God! Kick me in the butt, will you? I’m rambling as if you actually wrote something like this and me analyzing it… … …
I’ll be waiting for the next chapter! Hugs you tightly!
schedule August 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Damnit... Update soooooooon.... Or I swear I'm going to die here. I cried when reading about Felix's death. So Sad... Amazing story though. I'm so damned curious to find out what's 'wrong' with Nicoli. It's so FKed up. You've gotten me hooked. I love the story, and love the characters. Update soon!!!
person RachelB
schedule August 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I almost died waiting I think...I thought I was gonna have the baby before I read another chapter... :( I ended up rereading the whole story again...lol
But it was worth it of course...Poor Felix...Again....lol guy can't catch a break.
person BlueFishie
schedule August 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was some smack down of the hand of friendship there. I got all happy when Nicoli offered and then I am pretty sure my face fell when Felix said no. Well so much for sappy happy I know everything about you now friends...

I'm ready for some more action now after all that sad. Though whatever you want to write is fine by me. lol

Your gift is almost done by the way. Just need to find songs for a couple of more people.
person Malachi2223
schedule August 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You're right, that was a seriously long time coming, but well worth the wait.

I'm really loving and hurting for Felix right now. He really opened up to Nicoli, even crying in front of him and I think he will wind up being friends with him. The ending scene with Ethan and Felix was so touching and heartwarming. The way Felix was stroking his brow and hair was so tender and then when Ethan lay his head in Felix's lap and hugged his hips it was wonderful. But poor Felix crying as Ethan drifted off to sleep in his lap was too sad.

I can't wait to see what happens in the second half of this chapter.
schedule August 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Even though Felix doesn't want to admit to it, I do believe he cares for Nicoli on some level. If something happens to him he would be sad. It's so heartbreaking to know that Felix and Ethan were so in love and now they can't be. Ethan might move on but Felix will never know love like Ethan again. Sad days...I'm interested to see where this story is going now and what will take place next. I can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule August 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for the next chapter, when will omen be making a reappearance, i just love his love hate relationship with andre.
person BijouDuMon
schedule August 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
:( I'm so sad!! There hasn't been an update in foreevveerrr!!! T^T *sobs* please! I'm begging yew! (my brothers and cousins are too!) we are all such big fans! XD