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I bet Trever saw that Nicoli had changed. Maybe he is more observent then we think. Glad to see he is getting some fun time with Amelia. Can't wait for the next chapter.

The chapter was fun and exciting...I'm happy Amelia got to show Nic her view on Whixton! So many cool places...Nic standing up to Trevor was icing on the cake! Maybe now that bully will leave him alone and they might actually be able to eat lunch in peace! Great fun chapter! Can't wait for the next one and I really can't wait for the Anniversary! Wow time has flown by and I'm happy to say I've seen this story grow! Thanks for sharing!

Ahhh...another great chapter! I can't believe its coming up on three years! WOW!

It was nice to see all the neat things Whixton is hiding...I wish I could play with a Merman! Nicoli is so lucky to have a friend like Amelia.

I think maybe Trevor saw Nicoli in a new light and developed some respect for him...maybe that's why he walked away. I hope you'll let us know one day.

Thanks for this feel good chapter, I think everyone needed it along with Nicoli. I sure did miss Ethan, though!

Hey grl! I LOVE THIS STory. This IMMEDIATELY became my new numba ONE fave story on this WHOLE site after I got caught up with all the chaps. OMG, I love this story. I think you HAVE to SERIOUSLY consider becoming an author for reaaaaals b/c you have some serious talent. I swear. You write amazingly well. I was actually surprised at your skill. You are wonderful at dialogue and developing the characters and like everythin else probly. so I heart you for that. Kudos to u. Anyway, I'm gonna be truthful here. When I first read through the 1st chaps, I was excited but then I saw the number of chapters there are, and well, I got worried as you can say b/c I kinda figured if this story has THIS many chapters, then it may be no good and just drag on since there's not many stories that have as many chapters as this. HOWEVER, I decided to keep continuin b/c you have talent, and I WAS IMMENSE;LY SURPRISED with how addicting this was! I soon learned that I shouldn't have like JUDGED THIS STORY from the number of chaps before truly reading it first. You know, I actually ENJOY how there are so many chaps, and I want you to not rush anything. Please keep continuing with this pace. Its perfect. So...omg I can already see how Nicoli is startin to fall for our vampire Ethan. I love ETHAN and most of the rest. I really missed Ethan in this chapter but thats alright. This chappie was AWESOME like all the rest. I really enjoy how Amelia and Nickel's relationship!! i'm curious as to who the guy in his nightmares are. I do think he'll show himself soon, and will prove to be a threat. Maybe he's even the person that the Guardian said would be coming to help them soon with the book I think. Anyway, PLEASE UPDATE asap :D

That chapter was adorable. Loved the fairies. A love Amelia. Lol. And glad your happy with my squeals. I did it again when I saw an update. And you're extremely mean with your vagueness. lol. So mean.. Lol. Well, I'm waiting for the someday when I find out what's going to happen. T^T Hopefully soon.

Awesomeness. :D Great chappie! Amelia is such a kick-ass friend. :) But I gotta tell you something; I re-read last chapter and found out I was saying Nicoli's name wrong! Xb I was so embarrassed! I found out it's pronounced 'NICK-OH-LIE', and I've been saying it, 'NICK-OL-EE'. :/ Weird? Idk. I tried saying it your way, but I like the way I've been saying it. ;b LoL And alsooo, my brother and I decided we're gonna dress up as two of your characters from MD for Halloween! (if that's alright with you!) XD He's gonna be Andre (and seriously, he acts like him too) and I'm thinking of dressing up as either Amelia or Cora. XD Hopefully we'll get some pics up after our rendezvous around the neighborhood. :) Could we maybe get some ideas as to what those three wear day to day? Andre would be easy, (eye patch, nice suit . . . smexy . . . ) but I'm not sure what kind of clothes Cora or Amelia wear. Any help would be much appreciated!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!! ~Bijou

this is xmenjeanpaul lol dont fell like loging in all i can say is that the last two chapters where fing great and the new ursla woman sounds like a delighful woman and i do want to see more of her as well so yeah im still madly in love with your story and that is suprising for me since i normally fall out of love with a long winded stoy shuch as this but for some reason or another this one has been able to keep me on the eade of my feet always wishing for more but then i geuss that i what a good story do no?

Yep...in about 4 months I will be having a little boy :D lol
And yeah...I read pretty fast.
I'm so ready to know this big thing with Nicoli is though!
I've actually started reading out loud now...the doctors say the baby can hear from about 4 months. I think the baby wants to know what happens next too because once I stop reading he kicks me like crazy!
So yeah...I think we have your youngest fan! :p

Oh I do like Ursula, the new character. She seems to fit right in with the rest of the characters. Her personality seems fun! I wonder who this person is that is suppose to help them with the book...I think it might be one of the witches but I'm not so sure. Anywho great chapter. I'm happy Nicoli talked to Ethan about his suicide. It was good to learn more about what was going on in his head. Can't wait until the next chapter!

Great chapter! I loved the interaction between Ethan and Nicoli, too bad they didn't have time for a quickie across the hood of that delicious car! *sigh*

I know what you mean about Ursula taking on a bigger part than you intended. I have a story that was only supposed to have one main couple and now has three! It's gotten way bigger than I had intended with death attempts, a love triangle,and a tad bit of BDSM! LOL! Werewolves are a hard bunch to handle!

I can't wait to read more, I wonder if Ursula will somehow play a part in this dark thing going on with Nicoli?