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OMG!!! Just read the preview of the next book. I love it!!! Need more! :D
You're an amazing writer.

Moonlight Conviction...I LOVE YOU! hahahaha!!!! wooh wooh go moonlight go moonlight!....okay sorry had to get it out. first off, love the synopsis for moonlight conviction. you are such a tease always hinting yet not telling! its whats kept me addicted to moonlight denial and moonlight conviction will probably do the same. sweet prelude for moonlight conviction, gotta love when nicoli's eye starts to bleed, it just adds to the drama of the story. I was a little sad we didn't get to see graduation, im sure it would've been great, that's what sucks about time skips, they move the story along and yet you miss out on some great parts. but o well, its your story and you choose how you want it written. aww dont worry i can forgive you for killing demetri in time, and as long as you don't kill seth as well, then i would really cry and probably abandon the story...jk i wouldn't abandon you! ya i probably forgot to mention you killed demetri off right before my birthday, so basically that destroyed any joy that week, everything just went down hill after that. o the story i read before was 'Reality is Insanity'. you know i went back and read its chapters and i realized nicoli and Joshua are very much alike. they both attract deliciously dominating dudes.(aka DDD's o can i just say Juniper was a great character, he was like a mix of ethan and andre...or is it the other way round? any way back to moonlight conviction. WHAT! you almost dropped MD!? im sorry, im very sorry i should have been reviewing and supporting you and telling how great of a story it is. please forgive me! ya i can understand how its hard to keep up a story. i had a story i was going to put up here but the disk it was on broke and i just didn't have the heart to try and restart it. once you get the initial idea for a story your all gung ho but then ya hit a block and ya don't know what to do, it sucks. so don't feel bad about not finishing your stories, they were stepping stones on getting you to were you needed to be in order to do a story like moonlight denial. you should feel proud of yourself for accomplishing it. ya i was thinking way to hard about this but i was contemplating how the different colors of the moon could apply to each story. like you have your normal white moon, then yellow and then red or blue. so like white was the first book, because its the base from which the others come. then the yellow or red moon which is wicked and sometimes down right creepy on a dark night which shows how the second book delves deeper into darker subjects and creatures. then the blue moon for the third book were it shows something that should be impossible coming to pass (cough cough hearts being destroyed cough cough) :P! but anyways i think i've written you a long enough review, good luck and cant wait to here from you!!!

Ohhh, i can't wait for the sequel, please hurry.

OMG! Do not keep us waiting! I want more, like, yesterday...no, like last year! I can feel the pull of a mystery unraveling already and I'm excited. ^^ I feel that this book is going to be even more climactic than the last. You are building well on your firm foundation, so keep up the good work my dear! I'll hang with through it all! :-D

Ok, so it's taken a little longer to review this chapter than I thought it would. But I finally got to it! Man, it has been so crazy and exhausting these past few days. On Friday, I went to an art school open house almost halfway across the state (I'm only going to the local community college right now, getting my required courses out of the way and some beginner's experience before I start art school for photography, and I was finishing up my chores later that night, when my sister (the one closest to me in age) called me from our old high school. She was there for the Relay for Life walk for our area, and she wanted me up go hang out with her. So I walked up there (it's only like a five to seven minute walk, and I used to do it five out of seven days a week for school xD), and somehow she talked me into camping out with her up there... -sweatdrop- It was a twenty-four hour deal, so we were up all night walking laps around the track. By the time we left around 3pm the next day, I was so dead tired, and my feet and back were killing me. And to top it off, I got sunburned on the tops of my shoulders and my face. -_- So, I've been in serious agony for the last couple days. I got home on Sat., got a shower, massaged lotion into my feet (which is the only thing that saved me from even more agony the next morning), and passed out around 5pm. I didn't even brush my hair, so it was a matted mess when I woke up the next morning at 8:30am. XDD Sunday was a lazy day that I desperately needed in order to recuperate. Unfortunately, I wound up making supper (chicken fettuccine alfredo) because my chicken was about to spoil and walking (God help me) down to the post office because the mail hadn't been gotten in several days. So my lazy day wasn't as lazy as I would have hoped. But I got to watch a cool alien movie called Monsters and some xxxHolic, so it was a good day. I'm feeling much better today, though my sunburn is still bothering me a little (and it didn't help that when my mom and little sister, the one who just had the baby, dropped by earlier, my mom leaned her elbows on my shoulders so she could look down at the baby over my shoulder. T_T I almost cried, and everyone looked at me funny when I gasped and seized up). So anyway, I'm making excuses and babbling again. This is starting out rather poorly already... On to the review! And I promise it won't be very long. ;P
Oh, Darky... You have no idea how much I disliked you for that little blip in the beginning. It was like dangling a piece of meat in front of a hungry dog and then taking it away. So mean~ You're seriously killing me with suspense about the Evil Dream Guy! xDD The Heaven Room. Oh Nicoli, I love you and your disoriented moments. They're always very entertaining. YAY~!! He's okay! (Not that I doubted for a second that he wouldn't be...) Lol. Amelia, are you sure it's a good idea to belly flop on someone who was stabbed through the gut with a pipe? Aww. Another scar... But at least Nicoli seems to be semi-okay with this one. I guess what Ethan said a couple of chapters back really helped him come to terms and accept. YAY~!! The museum was fixed! I'm so happy! Yea, Ethan, Nicki needs to breathe. xD Poor Ethan. He was probably scared out of his wits, thinking Nicoli was going to die. Cute moment is cute~! They're really starting to act like a couple and not just 'friends with benefits'. I mean, the scene where Ethan has his head against Nicoli's stomach? -sparkles all around- So adorable!! And now Nicoli gave Ethan the drive to actually face Meier seriously. Yes! Nicoli's going to learn to fight! Awesome! I'm seriously looking forward to that. I bet he's going to be totally kickass. Pretty soon he'll have the moves to back his sassy mouth. XDD Lol. He slammed the door in Ethan's face. Yay! Nicoli vs. Felix banter is back! I missed this. I mean, I like them getting along, but them bantering and dissing each other is so much more fun.
Aww. Felix and Deloris had a cute ghostie moment.
And Andre and Owen are back on speaking (non-hostile, er... semi-hostile...) terms! This is definitely a more fitting ending to the first book than I was thinking. :) "Soooo, no chance of us getting back together, huh?" xD Oh God, Andre, I love you. -coughGavincough-
Aww! A nice, normal birthday party to get back into the swing of everyday life! xD It's hard to imagine skinny little Amelia gobbling up three pieces of cake and still being hungry. That's pretty insane. But I guess I understand. My best friend is like that. She's so skinny, but she eats like a teenage boy. XD Oooh. It sucks that the clan will be leaving Nicoli and Amelia behind if they get a lead before they graduate. That probably really pisses them off. xD I bet they Ethan will wind up staying too... ;D Are they seniors, btw? Or younger? I can't remember. Lol. I loved how surprised Nicoli was by Conrad and Deloris having the hots for each other.
Aww. This scene was cute and sad and very bittersweet. I don't want Deloris to go either! I'm really going to miss her. Lol. Leave it to Deloris to go snooping about the other Guardians. She really is a firecracker. -cries- I felt so bad for Conrad as Deloris was disappearing. It's obvious he liked her a lot.
I have really mixed feelings now about Dimitri being dead. I was kinda sorta hoping he'd survive somehow, no matter how slim I knew the chances were. But then it was confirmed, and I started getting a sinking feeling in my gut, which chilled my entire body when it was announced that Meier was the new clan leader. All I could think was "Fuck no..." He's kind of the obvious choice, though, with Ira dead. I can say that I'm glad it isn't Seth, but Meier isn't all that much better. Poor Ethan...
Woohoooooo!! MD is over! -throws confetti and blows on a noise maker and glomps you- And to think, it only took three (almost four) years and 85 chapters. XDD The 'something' the second book is going to deal with BETTER be the evil aura and Nicoli's eye and the Evil Dream Guy and the significance of 'Who Killed Cock Robin', or I'm going to flip. I feel like I'm going to die if I don't find out soon. xD Yes, I know I'm being a drama llama, sorry. Well, I'm looking forward to this sneak preview, and I hope your break isn't too long. I'll give you about a month before I come looking for you. How's that sound? :D Tootles~! -glomps you again-

Sorry!!! I accidentaly put "Darkness" as the username in my last review LOL It's me,Mint an here is the review again:
HI Darky!!! I totally get you were JUST obviously saying (in that last line ) that it is jus the end of Book One! LOL, what else could you mean? Anyway wanted to clear that up :D

Some how I new your where gonna end it! It so fealt like a rap up chapter I can't wait for the next book. Can you put a notice on your live journal since I never read my emails? Congrats on finishing your book and sticking with it. I look foward to reading the rest.

Congratulations on Book One Moonlight Denial completion! I'm sooo proud and happy to have been apart of this journey! I remember finding your story during grad school and all that stress it brings; and I'm happy to say your writings is what kept me sane on some nights! And I'm pleased to say that I've finished with my MFA! So thank you for helping through! I can't believe this is the end of book one but I'm sooooo looking forward to book 2 Moonlight Conviction. I'm excited to see what's to come and I already know it will be great because it's coming from such a talented writer as yourself! Now as for the ending of this book, I can't believe you had me shedding tears for Deloris and Conrad. They were so good for each other even for the little time they were "together". And Owen breaks my heart...he has grown so much and learning to forgive and do the right thing! Now you've made me like him! Enjoy your break but hurry back for Book 2! Don't worry you have me for the whole ride!

OMG FREAKIN AMAZING!!!!! Im just soooo overwhelmed like omg hahahaha i ment to review the last chapter but i was very busy. Jeeze a trilagy????!!! WOOOOP And his brother as the leader dammmmmn a whole bunch of stuff was going on :D Sooo excited for the next book please put me on the list!!!

Several things I would like to say...Of course I'm in love with your characters, they are amazing and I would like to have them around my house. Especially Ethan and Nicoli. Also, I was wondering when Nicoli's eye pain was going to make an appearance again. I'm still so curious what is going on with that. Poor Conrad and Deloris. It's very sad that she had to leave. Come on now, there are spells to clone blood, and serums to heal wounds, and magic to be had all over this world. Surly there is a nasty tasting potion they could pour on her that would give her form. Hehe. Okay maybe that is a little far fetched. Of course they would pick Meier to be the next leader, it's all kind of twisted and is gonna screw with Ethan. I was at least weirdly charmed by Dimitri. I just want to kick Ethan down a flight of stairs. Hmmm....what exactly was Ethan going to say before Nicoli slammed the door on him. It may not have been more "please forgive me", then again it could have. I suppose only you truly know the answer. And finally, YAY more MD! or wait. It will be MC. While I am going to be having massive withdrawals while waiting for you to start posting again, as always I will be glued to my computer waiting for more. Sadly, you have me completely wrapped around your pencil and I am unable to continue with my life until I know how this story ends. So you must finish it. PLEASE. You must promise me not to be one of those authors that just ups and decides to abandon their stories. I would cry. You would hurt my feelings. And I'd be forced to find you and pull something out of the movie Misery. >:D Okay, I wouldn't do that to you but I would be very sad. And now that I've given you the longest review that I think I've ever written for anyone (you've also gotten greater quantity then any others too, just in case you were curious)I'm off to go try and find something to make my life meaningful until you continue. Huggies.