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I am already in love with a Conrad and Deloris pairing...how cute would that be. Imagine the passion and fire they would have, of course after one of their head-banging fights. Conrad might have actually found his match. Nicoli is always my favorite part in the chapter, but when every you throw Amelia in, it's like icing on the cake. It's great that Nicoli finally got to have his heart to heart with Amelia and Conrad. It seems that Conrad actually respects Nicoli. Now on to who might be this Guardian. I might have some idea but I think I will keep it to myself for right now. Just until I have a little more clues. But I have to say my imagination has already put this person as the Guardian. I guess I will have to see how this plays out. I'm excited for your Anniversary on Oct. 30! Congrats of course, and I can't wait to read the anniversary chapter!

I'm Baaaaaaaaaaaack!!! I bet you thought you lost me. But no, I have still been faithfully reading. Just between moving (again) and working 70 hours a week I haven't had time to do any reviewing. As always, you are amazing. I knew that Amelia was going to be the one they needed for the book! I'm glad to see that Conrad does have a semi-mushy side deep deep down in there and that he wasn't being careless with Amelia's life. Dolores is a trip. I can't wait to see what happens next. I am still extremely curious as to where Nicoli's head pain and missing spots play into all this. I have a suspicion on who I think might be the guardian. And if I'm correct, that whole fighting them thing is gonna be an issue. Can't wait for more. And happy early BDay to Moonlight Denial in case I can't comment next chapter. Bye.

It was definitely better than the previous chapter. Nicoli and Conrad's heart to heart improved things a bit, anyway. I still find Amelia very, very irritating but I'm glad Nicoli finally gave her a little telling off. Deloris was also a lot of fun.

Um, I noticed in your note at the bottom you mentioned a DelorisxConrad would be fun...and it just reminded me of something that I thought I'd mention. I'm glad that Nicoli has stood up for himself now, but I think it was the fact that everyone was walking all over him, AND the fact that you go into so much detail about all the side characters to the point where the reader forgets what the plot is, that gets annoying. I mean, when I started reading I thought it was a romance story - I really liked the chemistry between Ethan and Nicoli. But now there is nothing. Instead, there is tons of info on the life and background of all the not-quite-central-characters. I was actually going to ask - is there going to be any romance again? I know its not the central thing - plot is also important - but considering there was some in the beginning (well, fuckbuddies, to be more accurate - but it's still something) and nothing now, well, I did wonder. And, yeah, there's so much stuff on characters that I'm not really bothered about when I'd rather know what's happening next in the story or experience some kind of interaction between Nicoli and someone who isn't Amelia - preferably Ethan.

did i mention that i love this story? i didn't oh well ..........................I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!

XD love this story so much! its so cool i love how Nicoli continues to evolve i cant wait to see the mystery of the evil man i realllly wanna know what thats about was Nicoli his plaything?? im so pumped about all the characters!!! XD and i love your writing!!! big fan lol cant wait for more looking forward to it! oh! how did you know that the song who killed cock robbin was going to be the creepy them song basically lol and what does Nicoli's eye pain have to do with the evil man?? just so curious!!!!! XDD

-huggles you back- I'm glad you like making me happy. I hope my reviews can make you happy in return.

I was giggling like a madman when Doloris began to tease Conrad, and a crack pairing between them would be hilarious indeed.

Poor Amelia got made fun of though... Then again, it was rather stupid to just do what she did.. Eh, she's still an amazing character anyway.

The scene between Conrad and Nicoli was sweet. To know that Conrad wasn't being a TOTAL jerk made me smile.

All-in-all, nice update. I can't wait to read more!! See you next chapter!

Okay, chapter before this one, I thought that what Conrad had said wouldn't really be resolved, but now it has! With Nicoli at least. I would am a little worried about what Ethan is going to say about Conrad calling every person he's brought around worthless.

And the whole part about Nicoli feeling weak, I think everything got hit on the head and I was happy that it came out in the open.

Conrad? Being kind? Having a sense of humor? I thought I'd never see the day!

I really liked this chapter. And Deloris? Awesome. Just awesome.

OMG. YAY, an update. I am so glad. Anyway, wow this chappie was really good so nice job! We got to find out more info which is always good. I liked seeing Conrad being reasonable to Nicoli. For a second, I thought he was gonna torture Nicoli in some way since he was so pissed. I am happy that's not the case. Anyways, I miss seeing Ethan more. Me and everyone else probably WANT Ethan and Nic to end up together. This is what we have wanted and expected but I read how one reviewer kinda assumed that they wouldn't be together since they haven't really been getting closer to a relationship. Anyways, can't wait for the next one. See ya .

hmm...good chapter! Deloris is a hoot and I'll never read 'Conrad' again but 'Connie' *g*

And it almost is like you wrote this chapter with all the different reviews in mind. Getting everything straightened out so we can all move forward again in the quest for the Hearts. Though with the way you like to put in some plottwists here and there, I do not think we will figure out just who the Guardian is untill we get to that chapter!

Keep on writing!

That was absoloutly fantastic!!! But wow this chappie was kind of emotionally overload!!!! Conrad beeing nice to Nicoli and the xplaining was just as unexpected as the soft and fearful side of Felix!!!! But the talk between Nicoli and Amelia was long overdue!!!! Now she finally knows how he feels and they can be on equal grounds again!!!!! All in all this chappie cleared up man conflicts that were brooding for some time now!!!! Thanks a lot for the emotional cleaning!!! Now we are fresh again so the conflicts can come up again ^^ I hope that you will update un the three year aniversary!!!! See you again!!!!