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October 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
HAPPY BIRTHDAY, MD!! -throws confetti and blows on a kazoo- And congrats, Darky. Your baby is now three years old!
I haven't been reviewing again... Bad Kissy! -slaps wrist- But I'm away right now with limited computer access, and won't be back till Sun. I'm on my phone right now, and it's probably costing user monies. But I just HAD to wish Moonlight Denial a happy b-day. I'll see you Sun., Darky! -huggles-
I haven't been reviewing again... Bad Kissy! -slaps wrist- But I'm away right now with limited computer access, and won't be back till Sun. I'm on my phone right now, and it's probably costing user monies. But I just HAD to wish Moonlight Denial a happy b-day. I'll see you Sun., Darky! -huggles-
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October 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter :)
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October 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ugh, my reviews didn't show up. I kept hitting the wrong buttons. Anyway, this is a NICE chappie like the others. You have TALENT, darkness! Where does this inspiration to write well come from? Anyway, wasn't expecting it to be Cecile! I thought that would have been too obvious. O well. Loved the romance wiht ethan. You're one of the top talented authors on this site IMO. You should get an award if there was one for stories on here. Are you gonna finish any other stories? I liked the one called 'Reality is Insanity. Is that what is was called? Hope you can finish that since it has the second most reviews I think after Moonlight here. Anyway, cant wait for more, and update.
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October 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Xmenjeanpaul~ it was a good past two chapter I liked them a lot lo and omg sex it's been too long since this story had a nice steamy part too it and as of the distince betweern Nicole and Ethen I kinda didn't pay that mucht attention to I was more bought up with all of the other chereictrts and how they were intravtiong with each other and I still have yet to find a auther that dose it so well as you u make such real life people in ur storys that I could think of metting in real life so that's why I love your story so so so much it fantsy but at the same time it's so real that I can escape to the point that I fell as if I'm in that world and not my own well I rely can't wait for things to start to unfold know that the guardin has been made officile and happy bday to this most wonderful story ;) and thanks for makeing this long ashome ride it's always a blast no matter what
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October 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just finished Chp 75. I did NOT see that coming. Woh!
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October 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was a great anniversary chapter! The sex was smokin' hot between Ethan and Nicoli...though I do still want to see Nicoli top Ethan >.>
Amelia was so cute doing her little happy jig! ^^ I wonder what's gonna happen now that Cecelia has spilled the beans? Will Amelia tell her about joining the clan's quest? Does Amelia know the clan plans to destroy the hearts so they can't be used for evil? How will Cecelia feel about the clan wanting to destroy what she is bound to protect?
Inquiring minds want to know! LOL!
And Happy 3rd birthday MD!
Amelia was so cute doing her little happy jig! ^^ I wonder what's gonna happen now that Cecelia has spilled the beans? Will Amelia tell her about joining the clan's quest? Does Amelia know the clan plans to destroy the hearts so they can't be used for evil? How will Cecelia feel about the clan wanting to destroy what she is bound to protect?
Inquiring minds want to know! LOL!
And Happy 3rd birthday MD!
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October 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
....hott XD damn i really love this story!!!!! Happy Anniversary!!!!Happy Anniversary!!!! lol cant wait for more i just love all the characters theres a lot i want to say but i just cant find the words lol Its really cool how you used who killed cock Robbin it was kinda creepy and i really liked it hahahaha this is one of my favorite stories!!!!! <3
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October 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WAAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHHAHHAAAAA!!! *falls off chair and smashes chin off desk* V_V uuughhhwaaaaaaaaaa,.OMGGG!!!! I LOVEESSS U DARK! DELORISS IS SOOOOOO LOVEABLE AND I KNEWWWWW THE GAURDIAN WAS CECILE XDIM SOOO FULLL OF EXCITEMENT RIGHT NOW I COULD GET A HEART ATTACK !!! YES AT 18 CAN YOU BELEEVE IT!!!!??? OMGGG!!!! IM SOOOOO INSANELY HAPPPEEE THAT EVENFELIX WOULD BEEE FLEEING FROM MEE WAHAAHAHAAHAHAHAAAAHAHHHAHAAHAAAA!!!! @o@Any ways update like in 6 seconds.Aaaaaaaaaaaaand make a sequel. And a threequel X3ALL THE WAYYY TO A INFINITEQUEL LOL IM FOREVER YOR FANNBOIIII I WORSHIP MOONLIGHTDENIAL ITS MY RELIGON D AAAAaaanyways, did i say how much iii looooovee you ? XD sooory ok, im getting creepy now. ANYWAYS!!! GETT TYPING U WONDERSTORY TELLLEEERRR:p
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October 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Okay. Since I haven’t really reviewed for quite a while I’m going to add reviews in parts.
To chapter 70:
I totally forgot that the clan invited a witch to try and open the book. And When Ursula started to wonder about Nicoli’s last name the wheels in my head started to turn and I started to imagine all sort of things. Now I’m wondering if Nicoli’s heritage has anything to do with that Mysterious Guy who haunts him. Did it make it easier for him to do it or maybe something else? Nicoli’s dad was born in Whixton, right? Hm… I wonder if there’s a story behind it and that made me also think about that second good aura that Nicoli has, that protects him… I’m still not sure how that all adds up but I can wait and see. ^-^
And you know, Nicoli is shit out of luck. XD Being the force that drives everything forward in the search for the Hearts. XD I was wondering for quite a while if he wouldn’t need to sacrifice something in order to find the Hearts and if they wouldn’t have any influence on him (eternal life? ;). I thought of the way the Hearts should be destroyed and if they’re so powerful that means that it’s either will be ridiculously easy to destroy them and it would require a lot to do it.
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The way you described Nicoli and his fears after everything that happened to him was very convincing. And the way he beat up Trevor was entertaining as well. Maybe he even made a friend. XD I sometimes imagined Trevor meeting the vampires ands they giving him a scare but now I’ll need to think of something else. XD
What Amelia showed Nicoli that night was great! XD The first time I read about the rings I was wondering if Nicoli would even use them? Give me a spoiler? ^-^ Yes, no? ^-^
And this: “…Preston has balls of steel by now…” is one of the best lines I’ve ever read. XD
I’m working on more reviews and I’ll post them soon. ^-^
To chapter 70:
I totally forgot that the clan invited a witch to try and open the book. And When Ursula started to wonder about Nicoli’s last name the wheels in my head started to turn and I started to imagine all sort of things. Now I’m wondering if Nicoli’s heritage has anything to do with that Mysterious Guy who haunts him. Did it make it easier for him to do it or maybe something else? Nicoli’s dad was born in Whixton, right? Hm… I wonder if there’s a story behind it and that made me also think about that second good aura that Nicoli has, that protects him… I’m still not sure how that all adds up but I can wait and see. ^-^
And you know, Nicoli is shit out of luck. XD Being the force that drives everything forward in the search for the Hearts. XD I was wondering for quite a while if he wouldn’t need to sacrifice something in order to find the Hearts and if they wouldn’t have any influence on him (eternal life? ;). I thought of the way the Hearts should be destroyed and if they’re so powerful that means that it’s either will be ridiculously easy to destroy them and it would require a lot to do it.
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The way you described Nicoli and his fears after everything that happened to him was very convincing. And the way he beat up Trevor was entertaining as well. Maybe he even made a friend. XD I sometimes imagined Trevor meeting the vampires ands they giving him a scare but now I’ll need to think of something else. XD
What Amelia showed Nicoli that night was great! XD The first time I read about the rings I was wondering if Nicoli would even use them? Give me a spoiler? ^-^ Yes, no? ^-^
And this: “…Preston has balls of steel by now…” is one of the best lines I’ve ever read. XD
I’m working on more reviews and I’ll post them soon. ^-^
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October 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Here is the next chapter reviewed. ^-^
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I just loved the bathing scene. XD Did I tell you how much I like your characters? The way they act, what they say, it’s always so pleasurable to read about them ^-^
Misterious Guy- a warlock perhaps? XD You gave me more ammo to imagine. XD If there was evil magic… Ah.. hell… The more you write, the more I know and the more questions I have. XD It’s infuriating but in a good sense. ;)
You mentioned about Amelia’s friend before but I though he didn’t want to be friends with her anymore when he found out she was a wizard (I like it how you categoriesed their powers). So they disturbed something? Hmm… Are you going to be cruel on Amelia and will you make them go into that cave? It sure looks like it right now, at least for me. XD
I always imagined that it would be Nicoli with great guilt who proposes that Amelia joined the vampires and the end of this chapters surprised me but I also think it’s better that everything I was ever imagining about that moment. :)
Okay. I'll add more tomorow. ^-^
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I just loved the bathing scene. XD Did I tell you how much I like your characters? The way they act, what they say, it’s always so pleasurable to read about them ^-^
Misterious Guy- a warlock perhaps? XD You gave me more ammo to imagine. XD If there was evil magic… Ah.. hell… The more you write, the more I know and the more questions I have. XD It’s infuriating but in a good sense. ;)
You mentioned about Amelia’s friend before but I though he didn’t want to be friends with her anymore when he found out she was a wizard (I like it how you categoriesed their powers). So they disturbed something? Hmm… Are you going to be cruel on Amelia and will you make them go into that cave? It sure looks like it right now, at least for me. XD
I always imagined that it would be Nicoli with great guilt who proposes that Amelia joined the vampires and the end of this chapters surprised me but I also think it’s better that everything I was ever imagining about that moment. :)
Okay. I'll add more tomorow. ^-^