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person Mint
schedule November 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay finally an update! I was very pleased when saw this. Anyway, great chappie. Very informative. I am extremely glad she's gonna tell him. Yay, I'm also GLAD you're gonna continue RIS. Please update asap!
person malachi2223
schedule November 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WOW! It's so cool that Nicoli is going to be the one to destroy the hearts, especially since he's been feeling so weak and helpless after his stint with Dimitri! Great chapter! Thanks.
person smint45
schedule November 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm so sorry I totally missed the last chappie!!!! But They are both so great!!!! First the nice hot smutt with Eathen and Nicoli and that the revealing of the guardian!!! I knew it was cecilia!!!! I just knew it!!! And The painting!!! That was so fantastic!!! I could really picture it!!! I wish I could paint but sadly I can't ^^ Wow thats so great that Nicoli is going to be important in the end!!! And again we have a hit to his eye!!! I can't wait to see where this is going!!!1 And I can't wait for the fight with Conrad and Cecilia!!!! That going to be epic!!! Please update really soon!!! I can't wait!!!! See you again!!!!
schedule November 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
One word...AWESOME! Can't wait for the next chapter.
person BlueFish
schedule November 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very late review. But hey, I'm putting one in right? This was the best aniversary chapter! Sex and plot continuation? With a cliffie that you do so well?

I'm really excited about the next chapter.

Oh, and I didn't really notice Ethan pulling away from Nicoli until you mentioned it, but now that I think back, it does seem so.

And does this mean Conrad and Cecil are going to have to fight?
person Emeraldawn
schedule November 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I feel like such a bad fan. I have just got to sit down and read the last few chapters of MD! But I do love it. I love our new ghost! Someone to beat heads with Conrad. But best of all SMEX!!! good hot SMEX!!!!

Oh, and I was so right about the Gaurden!
schedule November 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have more chapters reviews for you! XD
Here it goes:
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The scene with Faith and Andre was great. So warm and cuddling. XD And, and *squeal* Gavin’s good at massaging? Hmm… *grins* I haven’t abandoned my silly idea of Nicoli and Gavin and now I have another scene to visualize. ;)
Nicoli’s behavior when he tried to stop Amelia from joining on the search and from opening the book surprised me a little. I never would have thought he could behave like that. I can understand that with all that happened to him he would react strongly but actually seeing it or rather reading about it shocked me a bit. The way he talked to Conrad knowing what a hard ass the vampire is was just… wow. You know, it looks like in some weird way Nicoli and Conrad are warming up to each other. ^-^ I don’t know if there going to be more scenes with the two of them talking or fighting or anything but it was fun reading about the interactions between them. :)
The way the book was opened was also something I haven’t thought of. I thought that pure great magic will open the book or something but the original version’s better. ;P
And now we have another ghost! I wonder if Felix’s going to make friend with her. XD
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You’re going to make Deloris annoy the hell out of Conrad, right? Fun, fun! Can’t wait to read about it more. ^-^
Amelia’s behavior was rather stupid but understandable. I hope she’s going to vindicate (I don’t know if this word’s what I wanted but I hope you’ll get what I want to say. XD) herself in Deloris’ eyes.
After the brief talk between Nicoli and Deloris I’m wondering if perhaps Deloris knows that Nicoli’s the driving force in the Heart search. It looks like it. And I have a question. Can Deloris-ghost see auras? Does she know about Nicoli’s double aura? I have a lot more questions that you won’t answer. XD Will Deloris move on after they find Katerina’s heart or will she stay with them until they find all the hearts? And when Nicoli’s Spook Man shows himself will she help in rescuing Nicoli? Hmm… Yes, or no, I have a lot more ammo to think about. XD
On the side. My name in translation to English is Catherine or Katherine or such (in English, there are just too many variations of that name so I’m not sure which one. XD). In Polish it’s Katarzyna, Kasia for short. So I feel connected to that Heart’s owner. ^-^
I want Conrad to find out that Nicoli’s destined to find the Hearts and that they won’t find them without him. I wonder how he’d react on the news. ^-^ He has a treasure and he doesn’t even know about it. XD It would be so wonderful seeing Conrad cherish Nicoli more. ;P The talk they had was very pleasurable. It looks like Conrad’s not THAT bad. XD He can be so cute when he lets himself loose. ;)
I also loved that scene where Nicoli told Amelia what he thinks about her joining and how he feels about all that. It was very realistic what he said and wise. On both sides since what Amelia said about Nicoli was also very true.
A great chapter indeed.
You wrote that you want Conrad and Deloris. XD Yes! Yes! Yes! Too bad she’s a ghost. ^-^
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Happy Anniversary indeed. XD Congratulation! You wrote so many so wonderful chapter! I hope you’ll never stop. ^-^ *hugs you and gives cake*
Just the other day I was thinking that we haven’t had any love scene here lately. How nice that you gifted us with such a scene here. ^-^
Ethan got what he deserved. He made Nicoli feel bad and down and I’m mad at him for it. Even his charming personality can’t protect him right now. ^-^ … but I loved the sex between them. XD
I hope now Nicoli won’t be haunted by memories of Seth anymore. What I missed was a little bit of biting but I’ll live with it.
Oh, and Andre doesn’t know that Nicoli has FLS, right? Hmm… Imagine him trying to bite Nicoli so that they could have sex. XD. That would be sexy but since you know Andre better than me, you can tell me if he’d actually do something like that. ^-^
The talk that Amelia had with her mother was surprising. I thought that it’ll take some more time before they find the Guardian. It went so fast! Now I wonder what’s Amelia going to do… ^-^

All done! I hope I’ll review the next chapter right away but knowing me… XD Anyway I’ll be waiting for more chapters. ^-^
person RachelB
schedule November 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Missed the one before so I just read both and loved it all as always...
Yay for sexy times XD
schedule November 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I can definitely say I enjoyed this special chapter, so there's no need to hope I did. I can definitely say though, that I saw it coming. I sooooo called that the guardian was her mother. I was so exited seeing it finally come to light though. Now to see what comes of it. One thing at a time though, right? We still need to know about the evil that touched Nicoli, what's happening with enemy vampires, and what will become of Dolores and the hearts. I'm hopping up and down on my chair with anticipation. I can only beg for another update.
schedule November 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ok I did not see that coming. I thought it wouldn't have been any family member of Amelia. I honestly thought somehow it would have been either Nicoli or Nicoli's mom. I don't know but again you have managed to surprise me! Excited to see how this will play out. This was a great anniversary chapter! Happy 3rd Birthday Moonlight Denial! And of course congratulations to you! You are a brilliant writer and I enjoy this story so much. Thank you for continuing to this story. I'm happy to have been part of this journey and of course you won't loose me as a reader...you have a fan for life!