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December 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter, looking forward to all the chapters coming next year.
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December 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh Ho Ho What will she choose!!!! Im so excited and such yummy smex!!!! XD cant wait for more!!!! truly love this story!!!!! Have a good Holiday and see you next year!!! *Huggs*
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December 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm back! Looks like I was busier than I thought I was gonna be. Sorry! But I'm finally able to review the last two chapters I missed! So here are 74 and 75. :D
Chapter 74: *swoons* I love you. I love this chapter. I love Ethan and Nicoli. So hooooot! There isn't much more I can say about that part except wow, and I love you again. xDD The next part, however, is a completely different story. I had a nagging suspicion that Cecile was the Guardian of the Hearts, even after Ms. Deloris said that it wasn't a witch. I was stuck thinking, 'It has to be her... Who else could it be?' So, when the bomb fell, I wasn't all that surprised. I was, however, exceptionally smug about being right. xDD It's kind of died down, now, since I noticed that quite a few others had suspected she was the Guardian as well. Now I feel silly for getting so worked up over it. Haha. Your story makes me so excitable, though. I can't help it. xD I'm always checking for updates, even though I know you usually update on Fridays or Saturdays. I just can never wait for the next chapter to be posted. I'm too impatient! xDD I'm ranting, aren't I? Moving on!
Chapter 75: This chapter had so much information in it, I was afraid my brain would overload. xD Poor Amelia. She was so confused. I find it awesome that Cecile is a painter. Power to the arts~! And she has visions? Cecile just keeps getting cooler and cooler! I can tell from that painting that this story is going to go on for quite a while yet. It seems to me that the painting will take place somewhat soon. If I had to take a guess, maybe two years or a little less. Werewolves? I'd say 'Heck yes!', but I'm a little worried as to which side they're going to be on... It would be awesome if they were on our side. :D Lol. Poor Amelia. She's getting pounded with so much information. First her mother is the Guardian, then she finds out Nicoli is destined to destroy the Hearts, and Amelia herself is involved in the final battle, and now she finds out that the Fairbrooks have ALWAYS been the Guardians of Katerina's Heart. xD And now she has a tough decision to make about whether or not she should tell the others everything that she found out.. I certainly don't envy her at the moment.
Yay~! I'm all caught up! ^____^ I'm looking forward to your next installment, as always. Sorry this is so long. I feel kind of bad for making the reviewing process so complicated. xD But I always have fun reading your replies. Lol. I'm rambling again. I better go before this monster gets any longer. Byyye Darky~! See you next chapter! -heart-
Chapter 74: *swoons* I love you. I love this chapter. I love Ethan and Nicoli. So hooooot! There isn't much more I can say about that part except wow, and I love you again. xDD The next part, however, is a completely different story. I had a nagging suspicion that Cecile was the Guardian of the Hearts, even after Ms. Deloris said that it wasn't a witch. I was stuck thinking, 'It has to be her... Who else could it be?' So, when the bomb fell, I wasn't all that surprised. I was, however, exceptionally smug about being right. xDD It's kind of died down, now, since I noticed that quite a few others had suspected she was the Guardian as well. Now I feel silly for getting so worked up over it. Haha. Your story makes me so excitable, though. I can't help it. xD I'm always checking for updates, even though I know you usually update on Fridays or Saturdays. I just can never wait for the next chapter to be posted. I'm too impatient! xDD I'm ranting, aren't I? Moving on!
Chapter 75: This chapter had so much information in it, I was afraid my brain would overload. xD Poor Amelia. She was so confused. I find it awesome that Cecile is a painter. Power to the arts~! And she has visions? Cecile just keeps getting cooler and cooler! I can tell from that painting that this story is going to go on for quite a while yet. It seems to me that the painting will take place somewhat soon. If I had to take a guess, maybe two years or a little less. Werewolves? I'd say 'Heck yes!', but I'm a little worried as to which side they're going to be on... It would be awesome if they were on our side. :D Lol. Poor Amelia. She's getting pounded with so much information. First her mother is the Guardian, then she finds out Nicoli is destined to destroy the Hearts, and Amelia herself is involved in the final battle, and now she finds out that the Fairbrooks have ALWAYS been the Guardians of Katerina's Heart. xD And now she has a tough decision to make about whether or not she should tell the others everything that she found out.. I certainly don't envy her at the moment.
Yay~! I'm all caught up! ^____^ I'm looking forward to your next installment, as always. Sorry this is so long. I feel kind of bad for making the reviewing process so complicated. xD But I always have fun reading your replies. Lol. I'm rambling again. I better go before this monster gets any longer. Byyye Darky~! See you next chapter! -heart-
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November 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh, Nicoli with an eyepatch! So this has something to do with dark evil dude... is it going to be revealed soon?
I knew it was Cecile who was the guardian! (or rather, I suspected it)
I hope for an update soon again :)
I knew it was Cecile who was the guardian! (or rather, I suspected it)
I hope for an update soon again :)
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November 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Continuing on from the other day...
Chapter 72: Uugh. I knew this was gonna happen, I just didn't think it would be so soon. Nicoli's sooo pissed at her now. xD But at least her intentions are good. She just wants to protect him. We can't hold her actions against her with a motive like that. They're such good friends~ I'll admit that when I first read this chapter, I thought Conrad was a real bastard for jeopardizing Amelia's life by trying to get her to open the book, and even though it was cleared up in the next chapter, I was still a little resentful. I like Amelia, A LOT, and it really pissed me off that Conrad thought she was so expendable (which he really didn't, it just looked that way). And I think Nicoli was totally justified in his anger. At Conrad, Amelia, and everyone else. But hey, it all worked out in the end. Figures, Amelia would be the one to finally get the book open. And here, I thought it was going to be Omen. xDD How laughable! I feel pretty silly, now. -somewhat delayed response- Yaaay~! The book's open!! Omg, finally! The clan really went through hell and back to get it only to find they couldn't get it open. xD But now it's open! -throws confetti- Now let's all say hello to Miss Deloris! Hello, Miss Deloris! I was hating you for the cliffhanger, btw... Onward!
Chapter 73: I really love how Deloris turned out. She's wicked cool~ And witty. And I imagine she's going to be quite the handful. I'm looking forward to it! "Hmm. There's something to be said about accidents such as those." Yuuko: it was hitsuzen (inevitable, fate, destiny, etc.)! xDD Sorry. I couldn't resist. It was a perfect Yuuko moment. She always says that. Have you ever watched xxxHolic? I really don't know if you're an anime fan, but if you are, you HAVE to watch xxxHolic. It's so amazing! Anyway, need to get back on track... Aaaand, now Amelia's pissed at Nicoli for messing up Miss Deloris' house. xD “Because I like my guts to stay inside of my body.” Nicely said. Amelia probably WOULD'VE turned him and Ethan inside out if she had found out it was them when it happened. Owch. Dragged away by the ear. Not fun. The first thought that popped into my head when Conrad dragged him to his office was "Dun dun duuuun! Nicoli's gonna get it~" xD I love how Conrad admitted he had a superiority complex. That gave me a few good laughs. And here is where the misunderstanding is corrected. Like I said before, even though he had Amelia's safety in mind, I was still a little upset.. It kind of makes me wonder, would he have allowed one of his 'children' to open the book if he knew the risks but thought it might've been within their power? Eeeeek! Conrad actually SMILED! At NICOLI! -passes out from the shock, and it total Wiley Coyote style, holds up a sign reading: More Nicoli venting (he seems to be doing that a lot lately, but it's completely understandable after what he went through, the combined stress of then and now must really be piling up on his shoulders) and Amelia consoling, all in all, another amazing chapter of MD. I'm gonna be busy cleaning again tomorrow, only this time for Thanksgiving, but I'll try and review chapters 44 and 45, if not tomorrow then Thurs before/after dinner. Either way, it will definitely be before your next update. Have fun replying. xD I'm so evil~!- x.x
Chapter 72: Uugh. I knew this was gonna happen, I just didn't think it would be so soon. Nicoli's sooo pissed at her now. xD But at least her intentions are good. She just wants to protect him. We can't hold her actions against her with a motive like that. They're such good friends~ I'll admit that when I first read this chapter, I thought Conrad was a real bastard for jeopardizing Amelia's life by trying to get her to open the book, and even though it was cleared up in the next chapter, I was still a little resentful. I like Amelia, A LOT, and it really pissed me off that Conrad thought she was so expendable (which he really didn't, it just looked that way). And I think Nicoli was totally justified in his anger. At Conrad, Amelia, and everyone else. But hey, it all worked out in the end. Figures, Amelia would be the one to finally get the book open. And here, I thought it was going to be Omen. xDD How laughable! I feel pretty silly, now. -somewhat delayed response- Yaaay~! The book's open!! Omg, finally! The clan really went through hell and back to get it only to find they couldn't get it open. xD But now it's open! -throws confetti- Now let's all say hello to Miss Deloris! Hello, Miss Deloris! I was hating you for the cliffhanger, btw... Onward!
Chapter 73: I really love how Deloris turned out. She's wicked cool~ And witty. And I imagine she's going to be quite the handful. I'm looking forward to it! "Hmm. There's something to be said about accidents such as those." Yuuko: it was hitsuzen (inevitable, fate, destiny, etc.)! xDD Sorry. I couldn't resist. It was a perfect Yuuko moment. She always says that. Have you ever watched xxxHolic? I really don't know if you're an anime fan, but if you are, you HAVE to watch xxxHolic. It's so amazing! Anyway, need to get back on track... Aaaand, now Amelia's pissed at Nicoli for messing up Miss Deloris' house. xD “Because I like my guts to stay inside of my body.” Nicely said. Amelia probably WOULD'VE turned him and Ethan inside out if she had found out it was them when it happened. Owch. Dragged away by the ear. Not fun. The first thought that popped into my head when Conrad dragged him to his office was "Dun dun duuuun! Nicoli's gonna get it~" xD I love how Conrad admitted he had a superiority complex. That gave me a few good laughs. And here is where the misunderstanding is corrected. Like I said before, even though he had Amelia's safety in mind, I was still a little upset.. It kind of makes me wonder, would he have allowed one of his 'children' to open the book if he knew the risks but thought it might've been within their power? Eeeeek! Conrad actually SMILED! At NICOLI! -passes out from the shock, and it total Wiley Coyote style, holds up a sign reading: More Nicoli venting (he seems to be doing that a lot lately, but it's completely understandable after what he went through, the combined stress of then and now must really be piling up on his shoulders) and Amelia consoling, all in all, another amazing chapter of MD. I'm gonna be busy cleaning again tomorrow, only this time for Thanksgiving, but I'll try and review chapters 44 and 45, if not tomorrow then Thurs before/after dinner. Either way, it will definitely be before your next update. Have fun replying. xD I'm so evil~!- x.x
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November 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I meant chapters 74 and 75. It's really late. xDD I shouldn't be up after all the shit I was doing today, I should be dead tired and in bed by 9pm. But I'm not. I'm wide awake and wired. It's not fair!! T_T
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November 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
-squeals- HIS EYE WAS GONE IN THAT PICTURE!!! >.> Had to point that out to you, even though you're the one who wrote the story so you obviously knew. Mkay. ANYWAY, I read that comic... The one that your friend did? And I giggled like a loon. Mkay.. Just sayin. Now, to the real review... ing... stuff... Yeah, I'm hyper... I feel bad for Amelia for not knowing, but at the same time, I was kinda laughing. Poor girl. I'm going insane knowing that Nicoli is going to destroy the hearts. I'm going even more insane thinking about his eye and that evil thing... My begging worked for somethings, but now I have to keep begging to find out what's going to happen from that evil... Please please please please please tell us.... Alright... Now I'm going to go be a good little author and work on my own updates. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!
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November 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG I SO LOVE THIS STORY!!!XD SO EXCITING!!! That brief look into the future makes me so excited!!!! The eye patch ohhhh wonder what happens i feel like im watching a movie!! This story is sooo good!!! I feel a big showdown commin on wow.....XD *Hugs* I so love your writing!!!!
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November 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Cecile is so cool and collected about all this. I felt like Amelia hearing all this information, stunned! I don't envy her decisions she has to make, but I do agree that confiding in Nicoli is the best thing. Together, the two of them can possibly sort some of this out and figure out how to proceed. By the way, have I told you lately that I LOVE their friendship! This story keeps twisting and unraveling and twisting some more, I am loving every chapter! Of course you know I can't wait until the next chapter, but until then: Happy Writing!
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November 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
(Ok, that didn't work. Gah! Let's try this again...)
Yaaay~! You're back! How did the move go? Is your mom happy to have you back? :D I know I was supposed to review BEFORE you came back, but I've been kind of busy lately. And now there's a new chappie up, so I can review that one while I'm at it, too. So, be prepared. This one's gonna be a doozy.
Chapter 69: I forgot to say something in my original review of this chapter, so I'm adding it to this one. I sooooo wanna see Ethan fuck Nicoli on the hood of the Shelby. xDD Hoooot~! I hope you can add that in somehow. Haha. That was it. I can't believe I forgot to mention it last time. I'm so scatterbrained. Onward!
Chapter 70: Poor Nicoli. He's really having a rough time with his anxiety and paranoia. I feel really bad for him. But, kudos to him for finally standing up to Trevor! That jerk deserved every single blow Nicoli landed on him. He did pretty freakin' good, too. Nicoli is certainly able to hold his own. Against normal humans, anyway. I find it totally awesome that Amelia is good at football. It makes me happy, for some reason. Haha. And when Amelia said about catching Nicoli when he jumped out his bedroom window, an image of Amelia carrying Nicoli bridal style popped into my head, and I didn't stop laughing for a while. Yay! The fairies make an appearance! I love fairy lore. I was so excited when my friend told me she had what looked like a fairy ring in her back yard. xD I skipped around it like a little kid. Nothing happened, of course, but it was still fun. It looks like Amelia and Nicoli had tons of fun with the fairies, too. And lol for fairy bites. We actually get to see a witch fly in this! Awesome! And Nicoli gets to go along for the ride~ I'm pitying Nicoli's balls right now, though. Neeva was super awesome. I never expected a mermaid to be in this story, but it was a cute addition. Next chapter!
Chapter 71: Huzzah for swimming in your scivvies! I definitely wouldn't be swimming in November, though, warm water or no. The air is too damn cold. What state is Whixton? Cuz it's probably even colder there in November than it is where I live. So, yea. There's no way in hell I'd be in there. xD Oh, yes. And now Nicoli knows about the double aura, too. I really hope we get an explanation for that soon. It's driving me crazy. @.@ Amelia's such a good friend. Involving herself in the clan's search for the Hearts just to make sure nothing happens to Nicoli. So brave and loyal. And stubborn. Lol.
Well, I think I'm gonna stop here for now. I'll review the other chapters tomorrow, if I have time. I'm rearranging my room. Which means, cleaning, dragging everything out, vacuuming, dragging everything back in and putting them in different places than before, and then setting everything else back on my dressers and shelves and stuff. My lizard is NOT gonna like me tomorrow. And my cat is going to hate me for even longer, cuz everything will be different, and she doesn't really like different. Lol. So, I'll finish when I can. Love ya~! Update soon! And I promise to stop bugging you about the creepy dream-man. I know I've probably been getting on your nerves with my constant pestering. Sorry!
~Kissy
Yaaay~! You're back! How did the move go? Is your mom happy to have you back? :D I know I was supposed to review BEFORE you came back, but I've been kind of busy lately. And now there's a new chappie up, so I can review that one while I'm at it, too. So, be prepared. This one's gonna be a doozy.
Chapter 69: I forgot to say something in my original review of this chapter, so I'm adding it to this one. I sooooo wanna see Ethan fuck Nicoli on the hood of the Shelby. xDD Hoooot~! I hope you can add that in somehow. Haha. That was it. I can't believe I forgot to mention it last time. I'm so scatterbrained. Onward!
Chapter 70: Poor Nicoli. He's really having a rough time with his anxiety and paranoia. I feel really bad for him. But, kudos to him for finally standing up to Trevor! That jerk deserved every single blow Nicoli landed on him. He did pretty freakin' good, too. Nicoli is certainly able to hold his own. Against normal humans, anyway. I find it totally awesome that Amelia is good at football. It makes me happy, for some reason. Haha. And when Amelia said about catching Nicoli when he jumped out his bedroom window, an image of Amelia carrying Nicoli bridal style popped into my head, and I didn't stop laughing for a while. Yay! The fairies make an appearance! I love fairy lore. I was so excited when my friend told me she had what looked like a fairy ring in her back yard. xD I skipped around it like a little kid. Nothing happened, of course, but it was still fun. It looks like Amelia and Nicoli had tons of fun with the fairies, too. And lol for fairy bites. We actually get to see a witch fly in this! Awesome! And Nicoli gets to go along for the ride~ I'm pitying Nicoli's balls right now, though. Neeva was super awesome. I never expected a mermaid to be in this story, but it was a cute addition. Next chapter!
Chapter 71: Huzzah for swimming in your scivvies! I definitely wouldn't be swimming in November, though, warm water or no. The air is too damn cold. What state is Whixton? Cuz it's probably even colder there in November than it is where I live. So, yea. There's no way in hell I'd be in there. xD Oh, yes. And now Nicoli knows about the double aura, too. I really hope we get an explanation for that soon. It's driving me crazy. @.@ Amelia's such a good friend. Involving herself in the clan's search for the Hearts just to make sure nothing happens to Nicoli. So brave and loyal. And stubborn. Lol.
Well, I think I'm gonna stop here for now. I'll review the other chapters tomorrow, if I have time. I'm rearranging my room. Which means, cleaning, dragging everything out, vacuuming, dragging everything back in and putting them in different places than before, and then setting everything else back on my dressers and shelves and stuff. My lizard is NOT gonna like me tomorrow. And my cat is going to hate me for even longer, cuz everything will be different, and she doesn't really like different. Lol. So, I'll finish when I can. Love ya~! Update soon! And I promise to stop bugging you about the creepy dream-man. I know I've probably been getting on your nerves with my constant pestering. Sorry!
~Kissy