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person smint45
schedule March 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was so great !!!! I really loved the fight !!!! It was amazing!!! And now Dimitri and the others Coke up again!!!! What a bad timing !!! I can't weit to see what they will find in Doliris grave!!! Please update soon!!! I'm eagerly waiting for more!!! See you !!!!!
person Mintgirl
schedule February 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this is the same Mint as before...just usin the username now 8D Please please update asap!
person Noir Genesis
schedule January 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this story gets me all excited and you can take that any way you like *wink*
person RachelB
schedule January 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So I would have reviewed sooner but I was a bit busy giving birth o_O lol.
Elijah Dylan, January 12th at 2 in the frikkin morning -_-...but it was totally worth it :)
I've barely even been able to get on the computer since though, only just got to catch up with this, thank god for naps! Although I suspect he'll be up and hungry before I know it... XD
Still I loved the chapter and I'm excited for more :)
person Bluefish
schedule January 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am a little confused. Didn't Deloris say something about destroying the hearts in front of Conrad? Or am I just mixing things up?

Anyways, I liked the chapter. Twists and turns everywhere. I can't say whether or not I approve of Ethan not telling ANYONE the whole truth though.
person smint45
schedule December 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was so great!!!! I liked the smutt!!! And them Laura nearly finding Eathen :( that was really close!!!! And Finally we got the FLS again ^^ I love it!!!! Now Nicoli knows who the guardian is!!! I wonder how Amelia dicided!!! I can't wait for the next installment!!! I wish you a merry X-mas and a happy new year!!! See you
schedule December 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Really good smex scene! It seems they both needed that. It seems to have reestablished their connection. I'm happy Amelia shared everything with Nic. They are truly a team that I wouldn't want to go against. Now I can't wait to see what Amelia decides. I'm happy Nic decided to stand by her no matter what. That's what true friendship is! I have a feeling those 2 can go up against anything! Great chapter and I can't wait for the next one! Hope you have a Happy Holidays! And of course happy writing!
person Blastoise
schedule December 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Still love the story but dragging on a bit, really want to know about Nicoli's past and the 'who killed cock robin' guy, coz you left off that ages ago and I'm wondering if you've forgotten or something.
schedule December 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ooh.. Fun time for Ethan and Nicoli... Damn.. I WANNA know what's going on with Nicoli's eye.. Evil.. Author.. person... Some day.. Some day.... I forgive you for updating late.. I'm guilty of late updates myself. Sadly, I have a few updates on my laptop, all ready, but I can't update until I get a power cord for the laptop cause the old one broke... Three or four complete chapters, where I can't get to them.. Blah... I can't wait until I can read the next chapter... Update sooon!!!!!
person Mint
schedule December 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great job