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Chapter 77: Yay~! Ethan/Nicoli smex for breakfast! Yum! ;D Lol. Their banter afterwards was really cute, too. "Slut." "Slutfucker!" xDD Ahahaha! The image of Ethan sneaking around Nicoli's house buck naked was an awesome one. Like a sneaky ninja, only... naked. xD The shower scene was also ridiculously cute and fluffy. I had actually forgotten about the scars on Nicoli's back until that scene. It made me sad (and super pissed. How dare they mar Nikki's beautiful back like that! Those bastards!) all over again. But then Ethan said/did THAT, and I was like "...awwwww!! -hearts-" I think Ethan told Nicoli just what he needed to hear in order for him to get over the self-consciousness about the whip lashes. Lol for almost-heart attacks and close calls. xD I can laugh and feel pity at the same time, because I've had a few of those. xDD Haha! I'll never understand how people can tell when someone's gotten laid. It makes me giggle so much! I mean, sometimes it's pretty obvious. But Nicoli seemed pretty normal to me, just a little calmer and relaxed. For all Amelia knew, he could've just gotten a really good night's sleep (quite the opposite though, in this case. xDD). -shrugs- One of life's great mysteries? Lol. Ah! And there Ethan goes, dropping another important fact on them that should have been revealed earlier. He's getting really bad about this.. Bwahaha! But he totally made up for any frustration I had with him when he spanked Nicoli in front of Amelia. That was so priceless! xD Poor Nicoli, though. It didn't sound like Ethan held back much, the brute. More Nicoli/Amelia bonding. :D And omfg, more fairies!! -uber hearts-
Chapter 78: There isn't much to say about this chapter except, OMFG! What an EPIC duel! Lol. Andre collecting on bets. xD That's so Andre. Haha. But man, that was such a cool fight. The way Cecile blew Conrad away. And the way Conrad popped out of the ground! Uh! I get psyched just thinking about it! I'm glad they're both okay, though. I knew Cecile was going to lose, but I unconsciously found myself rooting for her. xD -le gasp!- Seth! That creeper is back in town?! T_T Will the clan and Nicoli ever catch a break? ...anyone up for a little grave digging? Lol. Reminds me of the Count Cain saga. Mmm. Cain always looked so fine in his grave digging attire. xDD
And on that note... I can't wait for the next chapter to come out!! I'm suspicious about whether things will go smoothly or not. I'm thinking not, but I guess I'll just have to wait till the chapter is posted to find out, huh? -sigh- Well, I'll wait. As patiently as I possibly can.. ...please hurry! I'm begging you! -grovels-

Love ya lots!
~Kissy~

P.S. Make sure you check your LJ. I left a nice long message for you. I'm behind you 100%, and all the way to the end, Darky, until MD is complete. I promise. -uber huggles-

I'm so sorry to hear about your niece, I hope things work out somehow.

It's been insane with the baby though.. I've never slept less (or showered less >.<) in my life, and I'm pretty sure the entire house is covered in spitup. -_-
It's pretty great though...
I loved the update... I won't lie though, I did skim a little over the fighting, I can never get into that kind of thing when I'm reading. Which is weird seeing as how I love violent movies lol.
But now they have their clue so yay!

Okay...first off I want to say sorry for not reading this until now. I'm not really sure how I missed it.

Now, on to the heart of the matter...maybe its just me, but I don't understand Amelia, Nicoli and Ethan's reactions to why Dimitri wants the hearts. I mean...yeah, I think its an impossible dream cause humans are idiots not lemmings, but its not psychotic or delusional in any way. Actually, its kind of benevolent in the way he wants to bring peace to everyone, not just the Vampires. In that way his dream is bigger and better and less selfish than Issac's dream was and Conrad's dream is.

Am I the only one who doesn't think his dream for the hearts is wrong? Now I'm having trouble seeing Dimitri as the total bad guy as opposed to what the situation has forced him to be and I'm rethinking the level of intelligence I thought Ethan, Amelia and Nicoli had. *sighs and shakes head*

Just when we thought it was safe to go back in the water! LOL! Seth appears again...I really hate him so much. What a bunch of poor losers.

The fight was awesome, but the best part of the whole thing was Andre revealing his bets with Cora and Ethan!!! LMAO!!!

Awesome! Sorry to hear of your luck of late, i hope things get better for you and your family. The fight was epic, can't wait to see what happens next.

dun dun duuun indeed! I am really starting to like Conrad now. He's like that attractive father-figure protector type. With a hint of sexiness going on. I'm glad you are back to MD and I hope your family is doing well. I'll definitely send some positive vibes your way! Thanks for taking some time out and sharing this new chapter of both stories! You truly ROCK!

Waaaaah! Update! I hope everyone likes the fst!

I cringed when Gavin tasted the blood. Ew. Seth is icky.

I'm very excited about the next update! Your writing style seems to have changed a bit too. Maybe it's just the action chapter as opposed to the other chapters you've given us lately.

I was giggling the whole time. Well, except for the end. Hopefully nothing bad happens to "the children" before the clan calls them back.

Hey there! Yay an upda. I missed you! This chappie was amazing like always, hun! :D Your writing never fails to impress/inspires me! I loved the fight scene! I loved seeing Cecile and Conrad 2gether again! You SHOULD DEF try to publish fucking SOMETHING since I'll def purchase :D This story is still one of my faves on this site! Anyway, I also want to know who that dream guy is! REALLY ENJOY the other story 2. Please update asap !!!!!!!!

I screamed like a little girl when I saw the update for this. Yay! The fight was awesome. And the ending was so dramatic. I'm still spazzing about the eye thing, but.. I THINK I'm a bit more patient. Yes... I fixed the power cord problem. Thankfully. I'm sorry for the problems that have happened lately in your life. I wish you the best of luck with your family. Your late update is forgiven. I haven't been able to update lately either because of college. I'm writing too many essays. At least your reason is better. Good luck, and Happy Writing.

OMG that fight was epic!!!!! I love how those two bicker tooo funny!!!!! Im so excited for the grave scene maybe the mysterious eye pain will show up or! OR Something else!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH TOO EXCITED THANK YOU!! Cant wait for more and i will pray for your family im so sorry that you are going through a rough time...my thoughts are with you. <3