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schedule May 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow was not expecting that fight! I'm happy Nicoli, Amelia and Ethan's crew seem to have won this round. Andre just has to be ok. Cora proved to be a mama bear protecting her cub when Andre was attacked. I was rooting that she would tear Ira a new one. I can't wait to see what this whole chain thing is about and what is next. AND so happy that your niece is getting better. I hope she continues to get stronger and healthier. You and MD were definitely missed but knowing you were there for your family makes the wait worth it. Family comes first always! Don't worry your fans will be here waiting and hoping for the best. Of course looking forward to reading the next chapter, until then take care!
person Mint
schedule May 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating tonight! Wow, what a long chapter. I can def tell you put probly LOTS of time typing them up. Jeez. WOw, this was action packed :D I'm praying Andre is alive. I'm convinced he is tho. I think we all want him n Owen to kiss and make up! Awesome chappie. Update asap!
schedule May 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please don't take long to update, i must know what has happened to andre
schedule May 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad your little niece is doing alright. If she can remain in high spirit through this, then she is a strong little one indeed. Now, for reviewing.. Yes.. Someday.. Someday I will find out about the eye.. but for now, I can simply say that that was an epic chapter. Watching the pendant attach to him, and watching Seth get pushed into a fairy ring was awesome. Would have liked to seen him get beat up more, but watching him get attacked by a bunch of fairies works too. I think this chapter was worth a wait as well though. It was pretty amazing. I can't wait to read the next chapter though. Please try to get it soooon? I would be so sad if Andre died... Good luck with the next chapter, and Happy Writings!
person BijouDuMon
schedule May 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh mother goose. This was such a great chapter!!!!! X3 I can't even begin to tell you how happy I am right now! You totally just made my night. ;) If I wasn't so sleepy, I'd leave a longer review, but I'm about to pass out at any minute. >.< Thank you for another wonderful chapter! CAN'T WAIT for the next update!!!!!! So excited!! XD ~Bijou
person xXkissofdeath89Xx
schedule May 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
...wow. I tell you what, wow. You've been a busy, busy bee. A LOT of EPIC SHIT happened in this chapter. Lolz for midnight grave digging. Although, the scene reminded me more of Cirque du Freak (the movie, not the book) than Count Cain once I had read it. And I had forgotten about Nicoli's cemetery phobia until now. (Coimetrophobia, to be exact. Ahaha! I have a printed out list of phobias from my high school days when health class was required. xP) LOL! "Barbeque, anyone?" Lmao! Leave it to Andre to try to lighten the mood in such an inappropriate manner. It made me laugh, even if it didn't anyone else. :D I love you, Andre! -heart- Poor Nicoli. Creepy magic stuff always happens to him. And now he's got an enchanted necklace on his person that won't come off... (But hey! The imagery was cool! :D) I had a sneaking suspicion that Dimitri's gang was going to show up. No rest for the weary, as they say. Ugh, Seth. It had to be Seth. He gives me the shivers. (I think I might need to go back and reread the chapters of Nicoli's captivity. I had no recollection of anyone named Lillian. -FAIL!-) But! You pulled the wool over my eyes in regards to Omen. I totally wasn't expecting that. Still not sure if that was a good development or not. T____T Andreeeeeeee~! You better be okay, or I'll beat you up! Then I'll beat up that bitch Ira who dared to stick her hand through you. And then I'll beat up Omen for letting you get hurt! Stupid Omen. It's all his fault. (Definitely NOT a good development!) -sigh- And then I can't even be properly mad at the man, because he let Amelia and Nicoli go. No one is straight evil in this story (except for Seth and our Mystery Dream Man, whom I will politely not ask you about -gives the puppy dog eyes-). It's a little frustrating. I can't get a good rant going, because they always do something, or we're told something, that redeems them. But, I guess it would be a little cliche for the antagonist to be all-evil, huh? And we're back to Seth being a CREEPY ASSHOLE! Dx I don't like him, I really don't. He really freaks me out... He's like, Jack the Ripper, freaky. Seriously. And what a creeper!! Feeling up Nicoli like that! The perv! Seth gets off on torture, and that irks me. Maybe that's why I dislike him so much. Because he's a cruel sadist who thrives off of other people's pain. And he's so PERSISTENT! T___T Just leave them alone, you freak!! I wish Ethan had gotten one really good hit on him, just ONE, and I'd be satisfied. You know, where he yanked an arm off, or poked his eye out or something. I pray that happens in the near future. -prays to Darky, the Goddess of... Whixton?- (Wow, that was actually a pretty good rant. Yay~!) Woot! Go fairies! You zapped Seth awaaaay~! Hopefully off the face of the Earth (though I'm not holding my breath). Sorry. There is much Seth-hating going on right now in my vicinity. It's how I cope with the possibility that Andre might be... -whispers- dead. But he better not be... Or I'll cry. Profusely. And help Cora rip off Ira's limbs. T___T Andre~! Okay, I'm out. Or I'll wind up ranting more. And this is long enough without that added to it. Damn! So much epic shit happened in this chapter! I can't get over it! Lol. Though, seriously, I'm done. Haha. Bye! Looking forward to the next chapter, whenever your amazing brain decides to permit you to write it. Which is hopefully soon. :D Love you, Darky! Muah! -uber death huggles-
person smint45
schedule May 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow this chappie was amazing!!! The scene with the locked winding up Nicolis arm was really scarry!!! I really thought that it would attac him to and try to strangle him!!! And the fight scenes were just amazing!!!! I really liked them!!! And the near FLS incident was also great!!!! I really hope that Andre will be ok!!! I totally love him!!! He can't die!!!! So please update soon and tell us what happens next!!!
person TT
schedule May 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Another awesome chapter! But I kept hoping Nicoli's 'Eye' would all of a sudden have a purpose or something =\
person Malachi2223
schedule May 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Glad you're back and I hope everything goes well for your niece.

That was a packed chapter indeed! I really really hate Ira and Lilith! Almost as much as I detest Seth.

I'm tired so that's all from me! ;P
person CMJ101087
schedule April 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Still here, still reading, still loving. And now with a working computer so hopefully more frequent reviews. Obviously I plan on sticking with you till the end so I'll be here whenever you get a chance to update. I hope everything works out for you. Good luck. *hugs*