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person BijouDuMon
schedule May 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OHHHHHH MOOOOTHEEERR GOOOOOOSSSEEEE!! XD My heart is beating WAY too fast! I'm like, "DAMN, what could it be!!??" AHHH. Great cliff hanger, man. As if I wasn't already anxious! X3 I REALLY didn't see that coming. Not at all. I loved the beginning of the chapter; Lance and Nicoli's bonding time. What a kick ass dad. :D And the story of his first love? .... Come on. Sam was a dude, wasn't he? ;) I suspect it very much. And Omen is just one hell of a freaky guy. Doesn't he have a life that doesn't revolve around sneaking up and harassing poor Nicoli? I mean, it's bad enough he tries to kill Andre and the other clan members but he tries to kill and HAS hurt Nicoli before, physically and emotionally, and he hurt his dad. What a hypocritical douche bag. Like, I ALMOST feel sorry for him, but really? How low can you go? He's definitely one of the guys I wouldn't really care about dying. I'd only be sad if he died because Andre would be devastated. And Andre is awesome. <3 I'm soooooooooooo ready for the next chapter, now, though. Thank you so effin much for all these fantastic updates! My birthday is Monday and this was a really awesome early b-day present. X3 And LOL thanks for liking my OH MOTHER GOOSE exclamation. ;) I work around kids and use to cuss a lot so I formed alternatives to what I use to say all the time. LOL Anyway, LOVED the chapter, it was great, you rock. \m/ Can't wait for the next one!! ^-^
person Anon
schedule May 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The rest of my comment was cut so here's the rest LOL: I'm soooooooooooo ready for the next chapter, now, though. Thank you so effin much for all these fantastic updates! My birthday is Monday and this was a really awesome early b-day present. X3 And LOL thanks for liking my OH MOTHER GOOSE exclamation. ;) I work around kids and use to cuss a lot so I formed alternatives to what I use to say all the time. LOL Anyway, LOVED the chapter, it was great, you rock. Can't wait for the next chapter!!
schedule May 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yes, yes, I am utterly amazed and tizzied. :P No seriously, it was great and i can see the entire crew coming back to that museum like REAL soon.
As for Owen, i really hope he pulls his head out of his but over Andre who still is pathetically in love with him. What Nick said gave him a lot of food for thought at any rate... just hope he doesn't choke on it.
Their clan needs to train up some of them as stronger fighters too. Dimitri's clan craps all over them in that department.
schedule May 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I always knew Omen had a nice guy underneath all that bad ass vampire hunter. But i hate to say it but i think he might be right. The hearts might be to much for Ethan's family to handle. I mean, after they kill Demitri with them what will they do with them? Power does corrupt after all. And I always assumed Andre and Omen would get back together but nowt that you threw this curveball with Gavin i don't know who i want him to hook up with. And it would be awesome if Nicoli found the heart. Oh and is Sam a girl? I noticed when he talked about Sam he never said she or her. Great chap! Keep it up.
person xXkissofdeath89Xx
schedule May 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ooooomg, Darky! We're at chapter 80!! That's only 20 chapters away from 100!!! *promptly passes out* x.x
person xXkissofdeath89Xx
schedule May 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Sorry about that. I'm totally good now. xD I'm just so excited!! MD's come such a long way! *sniffle* I remember when it was just a budding ficlet. Now, it's 2o chapters away from being 1oo, and it's got such a loyal bunch of followers. You should be so proud, Darky~! *blubbers like an infant*

Ok. Sorry again. xDD I'm not really crying. But I AM excited! You've delivered another amazing chapter, and it was ON TIME! You have no idea how much I love you right now. Haha. And I'm super glad you seem to have your motivation for writing back. What's an author without motivation, after all? This chapter was definitely a wind-down from all the EPIC SHIT (xD) that happened in the last chapter, which I was glad for. I was starting to think that if anything else action-packed happened right after that, I'd overdose on the epicness. xDD And then you'd lose poor little Kissy, your loyal follower. (But it would have been a noble death. Haha!) I knew as soon as I saw the chapter title, that Andre was alive. Of course, I knew in my gut long before this that there was so way you could kill him off. He's too precious~! Everyone loves Andre!! I was internally squeeing during the first part of this chapter. Conrad was being nice to Nicoli~ Yay! Poor Deloris. She seems pretty conflicted. You can tell she's upset that Andre got hurt, but at the same time, she's got her duties as the original Guardian keeping her from divulging any information the clan needs about the locket. Eh. More creepy information about Seth... *sigh* Poor Nicoli never catches a break. First, when he's a kid, he attracts some pure evil mystery man (whom I'm actually starting to think isn't really a 'man' at all, but some kind of... demonic possession or something. I've been doing a lot of thinking about Him. Rereading chapters He's in or talked about, and something about Him just rings odd.) who becomes obsessed with owning him, then he attracts a sexy blonde vampire who wants to sex him up all the time (which, come on, let's face it, is so freakin' hott~), and now he's got a psycho pre-vampire serial killer who gets his jollies off molesting and dismembering pretty boys obsessed with fuckin' him and chuckin' him (Lol. I rhymed!). It also happens that, said psycho pre-vampire serial killer is a SUPER vampire who's developing his vampiric skills way faster than he should be. T___T Seth is one nasty bugger, Darky! How the hell did your brain give birth to him?! Aww. Nicoli and Ethan had a cute moment! Nicoli... is so totally falling in love with Ethan. I wonder if he even realizes it... (That would be a huge, resounding NO!) I face/palmed when Ethan said about Seth being so fixated on Nicoli that he only knocked Ethan out instead of killing him outright so he could chase after Nicoli. I was like "...Ethan, you dumbass! He just got molested and bit and probably mentally scarred by that psycho! I doubt that made him feel much better!" Haha. Actually, that whole conversation kind of irked me. Maybe it was just because Ethan was exhausted from the fighting and gathering up people for Andre to chomp on, but he seemed a little emotionally detached. But like I said, he's probably just a little (a lot) emotionally drained.
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Andre and Cora interaction is WAY cute~ And what's this? Gavin and Andre?! In Andre's words, "Stop the press!" What is this?? You've just thrown me for a loop! Am I reading into this correctly?! Andre crushing on Gavin?! *brain short circuits* ....
"All right, I will see you all next time and, trust me, the next chapter is going to get you all in an excited tizzy!" OoOoh. Darling, you are the master of intrigue. I'm practically tingling in anticipation, now. I hope you have the next chapter out soon, or I may revolt. Haha. J/k. I'll wait patiently, as always. But that doesn't mean my puppy tail won't be wagging like mad in anticipation of what's to come. As always, Darky, I look forward to the next chappie. Please hurry! *clings*
schedule May 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Um, do you have a mailing list or somethign cause I am seriously into this story (though Seth scares the cackie out of me.)
ckestra@hotmail.com
schedule May 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm Gavin and Andre! I bet there is something there, they seem to have some kind of connection. I could see them together, although Andre might just make Gavin crazy but still would be good for him. And Seth's weird fascination with Nicoli can only spell trouble for Nicoli. Nicoli can't seem to catch a break, unless he is under Ethan *wink wink*. Great chapter as usually and I was very happy to see the update! I'm already in a tizzy expecting the next chapter! Thanks for updating.
person shilo
schedule May 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow I love ur story!! Please have more chapters!! And will nicolai and ethan be together?
schedule May 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I was so shocked to see an update so quickly. Am I complaining? Nope. Hopefully she won't remember the time either though. Still, good luck with your little niece. Kay.. And I loved seeing him pushed into the fairy ring as well. It was just epic. Seeing Gavin's soft side was really sweet, and I'm really anxious to see the next chapter, especially since you say it's going to get us all riled up. Have fun writing it. ^^ See you next time.