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For your prologue, I think that you should have mentioned that Lexie saw her mother killed at the very beginning, or do a small flashback section of Lexie watching her mother being murdered before you go into Lexie's point of view. Also, you made a mistake at the end of your first chapter. You gave the stranger, Lord Raven Belmont, the same last name as Lexie. Or was that intentional? You misspelled a few words, so you should use a beta to proofread for you. As for the plot, I'll just have to see more.

I would deffently like to see more of this story, please update soon.

Nice prolong - like to see the first chapter.