AFF Fiction Portal
person Anon
schedule August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I like it!
I especially liked when you wrote

"Like how I made mammy run away when I was four
Or how I seduced you when I was seven
This was all my doing, that I brought it all on myself"

I could get the desperation of the kid, what was going on in his mind.