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by szaugg

person rina
schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story! I Love it!
person DazeWolf
schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
He's as bad with names as I am, that Tacitus! It makes me feel a bit better about my awful memory. xD

"They’re coming to take me away, ha ha"...is that allusion to the Dr. Demento song? x3 Like, one of my most favoritest songs ever?! That makes Tacitus awesome. (: I'm glad you're posting a lot of writings before you leave, it gives me something to re-read and entertain myself with while you're gone. (:

I love it when you make a new story. I was having a discussion recently with an artist, and we mentioned that it's difficult to draw many characters or groups of characters that are each unique individuals without being cliche or over the top. She had very few characters herself while I only draw characters as a single loner or couples, finding myself unable to create a working 'group'. Somehow you manage to do something which is even more hard, to actually write full, developed stories with numerous individuals. Very impressive. (:
schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like it. One question...where is the Nick/Marcus sex? Hmm.... Well I hope there is more. I'm starting to love this family of Fallen Angels.
schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
too cute
person Rosei
schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"Oops" Chapter 1

What a hoot!!
Great continuation to "Highschool is Hell!!"

Tacitus really does deserve his own storyline
'cause the guy is a character!! I bet his personality
just flows out of you!!!

Thanks,
R