rate_review Reviews

Again, so freakin' cute. Poor Tobias, he's really freaked out. Makes you want to pet him.

I looovvvve a sarcastic & egoistic seme~~ (as long as he doesn't aim his hilarious sense of humor as me, really, it can be quite infuriating) Tacitus was just so damn... witty & quirky. It's so entertaining reading the banter between him & "sweetheart" lol.

I've got the same problem as he does, but it's with faces. Those & I just don't click...

Omg, where are all these stories I havent read yet coming from?? xD Great story. Like the height differences.

"Oops"? Just about the best thing about this was how appropos the title was! Such a riot. And I got a major giggle out of how dominant Tacitus can be over someone physically larger. His wit, his humor, his self-confidence (guess nothing is bigger than that!) combined with his obvious recognition that there was in fact at least an even chance that he had gone too far with this risk but damned if he had any regrets make him absolutely your most irresistable character yet. That and his certainty that his nephew knows him well enough to interpret his absurd note and its real gravity. The flaw of not being able to remember his lover's name even as he claimed him? All of a piece.
I swear, woman, you're gonna have a hell of a time expanding this storyline with the same degree of finesse you brought to the first chapter. But it will be lots of fun to watch you try!

My short review:

hahahhahhahhahahhaha!!!

Fun fun fun!!! Let November be over quickly so you can write another chapter :)

OMG, your stories are so good! I damn near peed my pants reading this one... I'm already looking forward to the end of November when you'll be back and can update your stories... Oops has such potential! Of course, since I just found all your other stories here on aff, and will also have to go looking on that other site you mentioned... at least that should keep me until the end of the month. I hope. Considering how I get into reading... *grins happily* I look forward to your return and updates on your stories! *dashes off to read some more*

Ha HA! You made another one! I'm so happy! It's too bad you can't upload until December. So, are you gunna keep making more of these stories??? Will you, please? There too good to stop. Great Job!

Greeaat! It's a pleasure to read you, really! It may be because I do not speak english as a mother tongue and I'm not bilingual as well, but the way you write your text would always sound 'delicious' to me. And sexy! (But english language IS sexy) Weird isn't it? ^^" Anyway, I looove Tacitus, really, he made me laugh, he's so funny. ^^ And his little one as much! He seems so cute in the eyes of Tacitus, though from what I understand he is a big big one.

Well, I'm looking forward to the continuation of this very much!

Bye (and I apologize if I made any mistakes in my review ^^")

Black Sharne

Lol, this story is adorable - love the last line ;)