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by szaugg

person Kip
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely hilarious! With Chapter 2 amazing me by managing to be even better (which I didn't think was going to be possible, since it rocked) than chapter 1...

Tacitus is such a wind-up merchant, but so amazingly sweet, a demon-spawn who likes cuddles! And I get the impression that Tobias is nowhere near as unhappy about the situation as he would like to make out. Really, really would LOVE for another chapter (hint, hint).

Sorry to hear about your concussion - hope it is clearing up nicely. (Which is not so altruistic as it sounds, as I love finding that you've posted new stuff). 'Purr
person TheHuntress
schedule April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL! That was so funny :oD It is a wonder that people tend to be "baffled and annoyed" around Tacitus when he is so eminently reasonable. Poor man...uh...demon spawn.
Do you plan to do more chapters? They seem to still have some adjusting to each other to do!
person Laie
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor, poor Tobias... I feel a bit sorry for him, but I do wish that Tacitus gets his way with him... I'm evil like that bwhahahah xD
person Kuromei
schedule April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol Tacitus should tell his bunny it took him, like, a year to remember his nephew-in-law's name. That should help in the name department. X3

Keep it up! =D
person Reike
schedule April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
haha!
Oh wow this story was a breath of fresh air to read!
It's so funny- poor Tobias getting all confused and angry,
but in all fairness I think I would be the same!
I can't wait to see what happens when he meets the family!
Are the all as bad as Tacitus?
Reike x
person TUTNguyen
schedule April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Man, gotta love Tacitus. Hilarious, H, hilarious. Can't wait for more.
person Basseygirl
schedule April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg teehee
this had me in tears laughing my ass off!
it was highly humourous and well written
can't wait till the next chapter!!!
person Rosei
schedule April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2

God! Tacitus is such a kooky freak!!!! Hysterical!!
Timothy, ah, Tobias is going to be in for a wild ride!!!

Thanks for bringing back a favorite character from Highshool is Hell!!!

R
person Kryst Sutures
schedule April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is just so much fun. It really made me laugh out loud. "Tibbles" XD. That one killed me for sure. I can't wait to see more of these two; they're so interesting and their dialog is hilarious. And it's so cute their names both begin with T lol...

Interesting to see the submissive is bigger. You don't see that very often. I don't usually like it anyway, but this one seems to work well with their personalities. And it's not like they're all gross and muscle-y so it works. XD. I'm ranting. I love this =)
person supergirlanna
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hahahahah!!! i love the ending! he really is bad with names! lol, wonderful work! i love your stories!