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for True Love Hurts

by GreatMasterM

schedule March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Whoaaa~~~ YS you wrote this?! talk about differences in writing man!
I find it a rather HUGE difference! I mean, having recently read slash work, and reading Nick go on and on about stereotypical gays... It seems like this 'TLH' does contain certain aspects of the stereotypical gays in the characters? *wriggles eyebrows at you* If you don't think so then ignore me... but if it is as so, then... What the hell happened to you in that 3 years where TLH was written and now man! Some life changing .... thing... probably happened or shit. ah what ever man.

Rather cliche-ish, but still, i didn't mind the read~ ;)

- nekoii
schedule March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was unbelievably cute! I was pretty much laughing the entire time I read it XD. IT's very good, and I must agree, very tame XD
schedule December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
cute, i just adored how T burst into tears because he was afraid that G would hate him--- what a cute relationship XD
person Kuromei
schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
After the angstiness of Black Star Cross(not that that's a bad thing), this fic is a breath of fresh air. ^w^ 5, all the way! =D
person Anonymous
schedule October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First off, I'd like to say that this was a nice story. But, you left out one minor detail. You didn't tell your readers what your main character looked like. People reading this story will not know what "Gary" looks like. I think this story can be improved if you described what "Gary" looked like.
person Anon
schedule October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ohhh that so sweet... u should think about another chapter :)