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by Neogeisha

person Luinil_Telcontar
schedule August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I only have three words for this.

Oh. My. God.

That. Was. Hot.

Okay, so six. But wow. I wish you would continue...maybe continue their story. Call me weird, but incest...it calls to me. In stories, mind you. I'd never actually screw my own brothers. Ewww. But...wow.

You're amazing. Please either continue or write another something like this...maybe a little series. *giggles*

nila

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schedule October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good story. Is there going to be a second chapter?
schedule October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi, there might be other stories with the same characters, as they DO have an entire family and friends in my head, but this was acctually just a one off that was written during a particularly boring psychobiology lecture.

Thanks for the interest!