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for Pale Moon

by DivaRenee

schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A prolouge should be more than a couple of sentences if you want people to be intrested. I do however think that reviewer simply pulled 5 pages out of the air. I wish you would add more on, I honestly can't tell anything by what you have written so far.
person myssez
schedule December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh yes! PPPPPLLLLLEEEEEEAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSEEEEEE! how many times do i get to review this story? how many times will it take for you to update more?! *gives large puppy eyes*
person MibuWolf
schedule November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, are you going to review? It's been a while. I'm supporting you the whole way so go for it! :) Good luck!