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October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is turning out to be a really good story so far (once I got the character's last names straightened out... I kept confusing the two at first)!
I can't wait to read the next chapter. Keep it up. :)
I can't wait to read the next chapter. Keep it up. :)
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October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it, can't wait for an update.
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October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! I don't usually go for the whole person A uses person B to get person C because it can get messy, melodramatic, and often the writer blurs the lines too much who exactly it is person A wants. But this is fab! I really like the subtle signs of Ian's interest in Daniel, the way he can't resist 'kitten' face and your characters seemed well formed. And Dan seems ukey but not really girly, and also tasty! Muchos enjoyment from this fic
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October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness I love it!!! Daniel is so cute ^.^
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October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cute story, I find the characters very believable, and your writing style is very fresh and original ^_^. Please continue!
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October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ian is really rude! I wish he would just tell Danny what's up. Who knows he might just help him get Adeline.
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October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like where you're going with this story.
stupid ian!
doesnt he know hes supposed to win daniels heart!!!
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please write more!!!!
stupid ian!
doesnt he know hes supposed to win daniels heart!!!
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please write more!!!!
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October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yep. I'm pretty much hooked already. Looking forward to another update!
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October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Of course you can only tell so much from first chapters, but it is obvious that you are a good writer and I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes!
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October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you've got me interested...looking forward to the next chappie. :D