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November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is amazing. I love the characters, their interaction and the slow, realistic build (especially loved the realism and humour of the last scene ^^). I'm in love with Daniel, he's such a kitten it's adorable. Can't wait to see his reaction to the kiss (assuming he remembers it). And when he mentioned his friend's place, was he blushing because of the RPG games? Maybe it's just my mind (exceptionally filthy), but the first thing I thought of was illicit experimentation. Guess I'll have to wait and see.
Good luck with the next chapter hun.
Good luck with the next chapter hun.
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November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes and the Audi R8
*drools*
So pretty...
*drools*
So pretty...
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November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That last image was really sick! I thought the whole chapter was a dream sequence.
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November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HOW COULD YOU STOP THERE? You have to continue soon. Please!
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November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Guh! So brilliant! You write so well! I really really like the pace you're going-Feels very realistic.
LOL The drunken snogging was gross (kissed him after he vomited! vomit everywhere!) and very very hot at the same time!
LOL The drunken snogging was gross (kissed him after he vomited! vomit everywhere!) and very very hot at the same time!
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November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god that end scene of the 6th chapter was hilarious. :´D
The characters are well written and the plot is good. My only complain is that the chapters are too short. :<
Keep on writing, because you definitely have some talent.
The characters are well written and the plot is good. My only complain is that the chapters are too short. :<
Keep on writing, because you definitely have some talent.
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November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Daaamn, son. This is good. I don't know how many times I looked over this story because the summary didn't sound so hot but this is GOOD. Like fuck. It really is.
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November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Omg...I freaking love it! The more I read...the more I fall for it! This story is just...so well written...so...sweet. (even though i can so see Ian fraking out in the morning) Awaiting next chapter with excitment!! ^.^ Keep up the good work!
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November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, he noticed the hand! Go on Ian, fall for him, go on! This chapter was lovely; funny with just the right amount of hints dropped here and there (and a nice drop of angst-ish-ness with the little brother)! I especially enjoyed Covert!Ninja!Ditching and Ian's teasing about the house rules.
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October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is really well written! I'm really looking forward to seeing where you're taking this.