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November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i always wait for a story to have a few chapters before i begin to read it. but i'm thinking i should have gone ahead and read this one from the beginning. it's really good and i love how deeply in denial ian is. i hope you update soon!
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November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hmmmm....wanna kno0w how much I like this story?!!!
enough to skip school, as it seems.
but I just had to read on!
so write some more, please
enough to skip school, as it seems.
but I just had to read on!
so write some more, please
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November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, fast. :D Not that I mind.
I get all giddy when Ian mentions this certain boy, but I guess that's just natural, seeing as I love this story and its characters so very much. I know how Ian feels. Falling for someone who's not considered a potential love interest can be rather... tricky. :D So far I haven't failed at alienating unwanted love interests, but I have a feeling with Ian's case it's another story.
So, good job once again. Much lurve to you~<3
I get all giddy when Ian mentions this certain boy, but I guess that's just natural, seeing as I love this story and its characters so very much. I know how Ian feels. Falling for someone who's not considered a potential love interest can be rather... tricky. :D So far I haven't failed at alienating unwanted love interests, but I have a feeling with Ian's case it's another story.
So, good job once again. Much lurve to you~<3
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November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I *didn't* notice you said disposable. What an image!! Haha!
Do I sense an epiphany on the horizon? Is it, could it be, will it happen? I almost died inside when Ian wanted to win so many toys for Dan that he wouldn't be able to hold them. That is the most kyutest image ever. XP I was incredibly excited reading this chapter because I really did feel that things were simmering under the surface and Things Were About To Happen. I cannot wait for the next chapter!
Do I sense an epiphany on the horizon? Is it, could it be, will it happen? I almost died inside when Ian wanted to win so many toys for Dan that he wouldn't be able to hold them. That is the most kyutest image ever. XP I was incredibly excited reading this chapter because I really did feel that things were simmering under the surface and Things Were About To Happen. I cannot wait for the next chapter!
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November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Heh, very clever story, sweet and believable and even funny in just the right places.
Is the fact that "Adeline" is an anagram of "Daniel", except with an "e" added, a coincidence, or did you do that on purpose?
Is the fact that "Adeline" is an anagram of "Daniel", except with an "e" added, a coincidence, or did you do that on purpose?
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November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So we finally see Warren, and Warren is HOT. I am well impressed.
In other notes: Ian is a bastard when he's confused, he always seems to desert Daniel when he has to think things over. Love Dan's reaction to Ian dating Adeline, tho, heart-breaking.
Again, fabulous two chapters!
xx
In other notes: Ian is a bastard when he's confused, he always seems to desert Daniel when he has to think things over. Love Dan's reaction to Ian dating Adeline, tho, heart-breaking.
Again, fabulous two chapters!
xx
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November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, things are starting to get good! And I'm loving this almost basically daily updates... because I'm quickly becoming addicted to this story. Can't wait for more! ^^
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November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is so cute ^_^
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November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your endings are definitely good, this chapter felt complete but it still left me craving the next one without it being a cliffhanger. Have I mentioned you're my current favorite author? Because you totally are.
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November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see an update. I loved this chapter with Ian and all his conflicting emotions towards both Daniel and Adeline. Whenever he is with Adeline his thoughts always slide to Daniel and it's done in a way that is so smooth and natural and it's so sweet that it breaks my heart to not see them together. On the other hand seeing his reactions and ridiculous rationalizations is fun to read as well. Keep up the awesome job. YOU are an amazing writer ; )