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for Cultured Spirit

by Blindfolded

person aki
schedule December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your story very very much and I think atm is one of my favorite

please please try to update more.
person Mr. Nice Girl
schedule December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much. It's realistically paced, which is pretty refreshing. Although I'd be a liar if I said I wasn't looking forward to the naughty, vomit free stuff. Ian's got it bad. Poor Daniel. I'd like to find out more about Warren. Update soon!
schedule December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon. This is very interesting slash and I hope to read more :)....Soon ^w^
person shinn
schedule December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just want to hug Daniel and molest him! =(


Poor Daniel! Hopefully it'll all work out soon! <3
person Carmen
schedule December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sigh... You always seem to know when I'm having a bad day, 'cause that's when you update! Does that mean I need to have more bad days? Haha, still lovin' it, though! Can't wait to read more!
person bambi4real
schedule December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow it feels like I missed so many updates! i loved the last couple of chs. I think it is sooo funny that Daniel can't see Ian's jealousy for what it is. Warren was a blast to have in the ch. I was biting my nails with a silly grin on my face the whole time. I swear that last line about being besotted was classic! Only problem was Daniel was let out in the cold all alone. Ian didn't do very well there. Oh I also wanted tomention that there were several nonsense words and a number sequence even in the story so you might want to check it out in case it's something to do with your word transfer. Great job. Can't wait for more drama!
person Rain
schedule December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love your story!! i can't wait til Ian and Daniel realize their feelings for each other and finally get together..the wait is killing me lol. update your wonderful story soon!
person BennyPeace
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Screw that intense ending, gimme another chapterrr.
person McAbacus
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Obviously not, or you’d be “besotted” with me

Is that the gentle ring of absolute and complete jealously I hear? Eh? Is it? This chapter seemed like a massive step in the right direction in Ian's head and I was loving it! There's the flipside though, I can't help but enjoy the irrational jealousy and possessiveness but at the same time making Dan suffer is of the sadness. I look forward to reading more soon.
person sstt
schedule November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn you're good! Like I said before, I like your pace and Ian's persistent denial feels very real to me, I can't even be angry at how he treated Daniel! Really liked Ian's thoughts before falling asleep and the dream description. Daniel not remembering what happened was an interesting surprise and I'm really looking forward to whatever happens next!