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January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So I really really like this story, and I just read it, and I realised that you haven't updated it since April of 2008. Are you going to continue? Please say you are. It wouldn't take much, just a chapter or two more, to wrap up and satisfy your readers! I know real life is a pain in the arse for online free writers, but please... :D PRETTY PLEASE? :D If you end up reading this sometime, go ahead and drop me a line. Email: ohnojulian [at] gmail.com
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September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story so I hope you find the time to update soon!
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September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Daniel is just too cute. I wish Ian would get rid of Adeline already. Sigh, I wish Daniel and Ian would just get a clue.
Please update again soon.
Please update again soon.
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May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is waay awesome. please continue!
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May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I stayed up all night long last night reading this! Its really good and im so excited for Daniel and Ian! Dude Adeline is starting to get on my last nerve........ SHE SHOULD REALIZE IAN DOESNT LOVE HER! lol and I hate this warren character too... but its so juicy, please update soon! :D
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April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh man. Ian is really frustrating. I'd be really angry if I were Adeline when she finds out. But Daniel is so much better.
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April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooo, this was unexpected but exciting! I think the thing with this chapter was there weren't massive revelations or leaps and bounds but lots and lots of prepping and foreshadowing that sets me up to be all anticipatory for the next few chapters. Ian becoming increasingly disillusioned with his relationship, the way he leapt to be with Daniel after they got caught (first time I've felt sorry for Adeline so far), the way the two boy's lives are being slowly entwined even further...
And this line 'Imagine how he’ll feel if he passed up this bike because he thought he wanted something else at the time'
Take a hint Ian!!!
And this line 'Imagine how he’ll feel if he passed up this bike because he thought he wanted something else at the time'
Take a hint Ian!!!
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April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! An update! Keep up the awesome work, okay?
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April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Daniel's so adorable. I love the pace this story moves at; keeps things realistic. I can't say I'm not anxious to see how the relationship begins, though. It's such a great story. Poor Adeline, though.
Glad you updated. Looking forward to more.
Glad you updated. Looking forward to more.
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April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
u have no freakin idea how long I have waited for this story.
If u take that long to update angain I think I will die. GOd I like Daniel and everything is so perfectly writen.
Please plese update soon
If u take that long to update angain I think I will die. GOd I like Daniel and everything is so perfectly writen.
Please plese update soon