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for Love Me

by Lunarwench

person violetstorm713
schedule December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I loved it. It was good to see the true beginning of a relationship and not just wham bam we are gonna last forever stuff. This is actually the story of how a relationship started and the growth potential of this relationship. Somewhere down the line I would love to know how Kae and Van are doing, or even if they lasted. But as for right now, great story. It was clear and fun to follow.
person Anon
schedule December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
freakin awesome!
person Nickywal
schedule December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story I only just found it. It was so sweet in the end especially Van showing him his true hair colour.
person HumanInfitltrator
schedule December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you that was beautiful!!
person Duelriel
schedule December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Please write lots more stories!
schedule December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww, I love the ending of Love Me. You didn't pull things out longer than they needed to be, but it was just long enough to really get to know the characters. Amazing job. :)
schedule December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Bawhahaha! Roman hands and Russian fingers! I've never even heard that one before. I liked the way you described the cats in the story. I used to have cats, but my psyco ex stole them out of spite. So I'm glad at least your characters had a happy ending, at least somebody did.
person Anon
schedule December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is soooo amazing... I love it! LOVE ITT! I'm so sad it ended though... Ah well, you better write more! Or.. or... else.
person casbuz
schedule December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
brillant story love it thanks a lot keep it up !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person lone_child
schedule December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg. i loved this story~~ much luffs to you~~
keep up the good work!