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October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful. great love and hot sex. what a fantastic combination
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September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
“Hey, wait up! There's nothing wrong with being a virgin! I can help with that!”
FUCKING YES!!!!!
FUCKING YES!!!!!
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September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am beyond words at your story. Few stories that I have read online here have touched me in the way that your did. In my own writings, I always try and stress the love that is felt between the two people. But reading your work, I find myself wanting. You are truely a master, my friend. I eagerly look forward to reading more of your stories. Once again, bravo!
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September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just finished reading this fiction and I fell in to with the characters. I'm not any kind of critic, but I enjoyed reading that fic so much, and best of all it had a happy ending! Definately off to read more of your stuff!
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August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this story is amazing
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August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's a cute story. I enjoyed reading it and the plot was good too.
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July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
“No way! Your ass is blushing!” Best line ever. And that plot twist...WOW. The whole thing(Ch.6) brought me to tears, but I'm so happy it had a happy ending. I think this was the best story yet but that might change after I read Rooftop. Though, I must say I'm a oneshot kind of gal so I'm surprised at myself.
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June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwOoooooooooooooooooooooooooo
Matthew. That's so tragic. I didn't want Van to really love anyone but Kale--wanted everyone else to be meaningless so it made up for the inexperience and such, but that's too unrealistic and the painful truth is devastating. My heart goes out to Van. It's the worst thing loosing someone, and in his case, loosing someone who was everything. I thought he was a rape victim too but the real truth is....oh god...I can't believe i'm crying....I'm sorry about all the crap I said about Matt, I take it back! :) I love Kale to death, but what he said in this chapter was so ridiculous. Love or not, you can't try and make someone move on to your side, especially after their FIRST breakthrough. Stupid Cutie! But maybe Van needs tough love....I mean, he does care about Kale, it's obvious and loving him doesn't necccesarily mean replacing Matt. No one is replaceable.
I'm a cheat--I clearly know he gets back with Van but why do you end the chapter with a definite statement like 'He NEVER....'
Too cruel. ^______^ S'why we're addicted to this fic.
Matthew. That's so tragic. I didn't want Van to really love anyone but Kale--wanted everyone else to be meaningless so it made up for the inexperience and such, but that's too unrealistic and the painful truth is devastating. My heart goes out to Van. It's the worst thing loosing someone, and in his case, loosing someone who was everything. I thought he was a rape victim too but the real truth is....oh god...I can't believe i'm crying....I'm sorry about all the crap I said about Matt, I take it back! :) I love Kale to death, but what he said in this chapter was so ridiculous. Love or not, you can't try and make someone move on to your side, especially after their FIRST breakthrough. Stupid Cutie! But maybe Van needs tough love....I mean, he does care about Kale, it's obvious and loving him doesn't necccesarily mean replacing Matt. No one is replaceable.
I'm a cheat--I clearly know he gets back with Van but why do you end the chapter with a definite statement like 'He NEVER....'
Too cruel. ^______^ S'why we're addicted to this fic.
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June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow I really liked it! The sex was hot and the story interrestant and well written!
Continue the good work!
Continue the good work!
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June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a beautiful story--so well written and sexy as hell. You really captured the emotions of the characters. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Thanks for the read!
~Rin
~Rin