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January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit. That was awesome. Um... that was unwordable(which is now a word >.> <.< >.>)
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January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You are evil, but you definitely made up for it with the ending. I'm terribly glad that I discovered this story, it has made up for my depressing day! Now I'm off to read the rest of your posts.
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January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this was a wonderful premise !!! I love that the top was the shy virgin and Vander was the expert- but with the patience to teach him. The characters are well defined and the sex sweet and steamy !!! this is going on a list of my favs.
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January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love Vander being sick and Kale able to be the strong one helping him. There are hints that Vander's past hasn't been a happy one, I hope he will find some with Kale now.
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January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is a truly wonderful&funny&sexy story. It had all the elements that keep reader's interest captured. Kale and Vander were sweet and ,in the end, realistic. I am deff. a fan of your writing and I hope you never stop !!!!
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December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I love your works. I truly do. First Imaginary Friend, then Rooftop, now this. May I please be your official fan girl and worship the desk you write on?
I read this all in one go, so sorry in advanced for the chapter-length review I’m sure this will turn into. I think I’ll turn this into mini single-chapter-reviews so migrains aren’t acquired because of this…
CHAPTER 1:
OMG KALE’S SO HOT! (woops, almost typed “Kyle” there, but “Kale” is just so much hotter) Sorry, had to get that out before I could give a coherent response, heh, I’m sure you know how it is some times.
I absolutely love his mom’s reaction to being gay, lol, so perfect. I can’t imagine how anti-climactic that must have been. Weeks, if not months, of torture go by as Kale braces himself for whatever her response may be; if she rejects him, then so be it. He must be true to himself if he can ever hope to be happy. If she accepts, then he would have the support of at least one important person in a homophobic world. Then all he gets is an “about time”? lol, perfect. XD
“He wanted Somebody. With a capital 'S'. He wanted The One. Someone to come home to, someone to hold, someone to love.” Oh my gosh~ so freakin’ cute!!! As a fangirl, I personally find it absolutely impossible to read something like that and not squeal and get the sudden urge to hug (smother) something. I would totally be that “Somebody” for him…sadly, I am neither fictional nor male. Alas, fate is a cruel mistress.
“Of course, he'd actually have to fight to do that, and Kale didn't fight.” Ok, that’s it. You’re trying to kill me, aren’t you? Bringing out the inner fangirl and making her want to sqeal and glomp while I’m trying to write a response. Well that’s it. I’ve had enough. Next time you do that I’m squealing, dammit!
“Jesus that was quick! What are you, a virgin or something?” Ahhhh!! *turns red and covers her eyes, shaking her head violently from side to side* Ah~! So embarrassing! Ahh~!
Gotta give props to the mysterious “nymph” though. When ya see a hottie, why wait when you can take ‘im? ;] Anywho, I can’t wait for the next chapter!!
CHAPTER 2:
Ok…shorter review for this ch….I gotta tell you, for this entire chapter I was so embarrassed for Kale that I kept on turning away from my laptop to hide for a couple seconds before the tension became too much and I just had to continue reading. Omg, especially at the end when Kale suddenly blurts out that he doesn’t want “it up the butt!” I wanna cry I’m so embarrassed for him. I think if I was him I’d have a serious urge to hide under the bed with the kittens at that point. And Vander’s so forward! Oh my gosh. I think I’m on the same level (if not worse) as Kale is with the whole blushing thing. Poor guy, I empathize all too well.
CHAPTER 3:
Ahhhhh!~~~ That’s it! I can’t comment. I’m too busy blushing and hiding from my computer. Evander’s just so damn forward! I love it….but I have a blushing syndrome worse than Kale….
CHAPTER 5:
OH HE~LL NO! “Mathew?” “MATHEW?!” Oh hell-the-fuck no. I’m so pissed I’m speechless. ….. GRYAAAAHH!!!!
Ok…..I’m a bad reviewer. I get too into the story and then I just stop reviewing the individual chapters. Lemme just say, I absolutely adore your work and this fic was far from an exception. I cant wait to see what other multi-ch fics you come up with in the future.
May the yaoi muse be with you~
Miranda
I read this all in one go, so sorry in advanced for the chapter-length review I’m sure this will turn into. I think I’ll turn this into mini single-chapter-reviews so migrains aren’t acquired because of this…
CHAPTER 1:
OMG KALE’S SO HOT! (woops, almost typed “Kyle” there, but “Kale” is just so much hotter) Sorry, had to get that out before I could give a coherent response, heh, I’m sure you know how it is some times.
I absolutely love his mom’s reaction to being gay, lol, so perfect. I can’t imagine how anti-climactic that must have been. Weeks, if not months, of torture go by as Kale braces himself for whatever her response may be; if she rejects him, then so be it. He must be true to himself if he can ever hope to be happy. If she accepts, then he would have the support of at least one important person in a homophobic world. Then all he gets is an “about time”? lol, perfect. XD
“He wanted Somebody. With a capital 'S'. He wanted The One. Someone to come home to, someone to hold, someone to love.” Oh my gosh~ so freakin’ cute!!! As a fangirl, I personally find it absolutely impossible to read something like that and not squeal and get the sudden urge to hug (smother) something. I would totally be that “Somebody” for him…sadly, I am neither fictional nor male. Alas, fate is a cruel mistress.
“Of course, he'd actually have to fight to do that, and Kale didn't fight.” Ok, that’s it. You’re trying to kill me, aren’t you? Bringing out the inner fangirl and making her want to sqeal and glomp while I’m trying to write a response. Well that’s it. I’ve had enough. Next time you do that I’m squealing, dammit!
“Jesus that was quick! What are you, a virgin or something?” Ahhhh!! *turns red and covers her eyes, shaking her head violently from side to side* Ah~! So embarrassing! Ahh~!
Gotta give props to the mysterious “nymph” though. When ya see a hottie, why wait when you can take ‘im? ;] Anywho, I can’t wait for the next chapter!!
CHAPTER 2:
Ok…shorter review for this ch….I gotta tell you, for this entire chapter I was so embarrassed for Kale that I kept on turning away from my laptop to hide for a couple seconds before the tension became too much and I just had to continue reading. Omg, especially at the end when Kale suddenly blurts out that he doesn’t want “it up the butt!” I wanna cry I’m so embarrassed for him. I think if I was him I’d have a serious urge to hide under the bed with the kittens at that point. And Vander’s so forward! Oh my gosh. I think I’m on the same level (if not worse) as Kale is with the whole blushing thing. Poor guy, I empathize all too well.
CHAPTER 3:
Ahhhhh!~~~ That’s it! I can’t comment. I’m too busy blushing and hiding from my computer. Evander’s just so damn forward! I love it….but I have a blushing syndrome worse than Kale….
CHAPTER 5:
OH HE~LL NO! “Mathew?” “MATHEW?!” Oh hell-the-fuck no. I’m so pissed I’m speechless. ….. GRYAAAAHH!!!!
Ok…..I’m a bad reviewer. I get too into the story and then I just stop reviewing the individual chapters. Lemme just say, I absolutely adore your work and this fic was far from an exception. I cant wait to see what other multi-ch fics you come up with in the future.
May the yaoi muse be with you~
Miranda
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December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story, I read it awhile ago and saw it again in my bookmarks, lucky for me you had added two chapters by then and I got an excellent read. Thanks for being a trully awesome author, with amazingly sexy characters and a capturing story. More please. Thank you, I'll check up on this in a 3/4 weeks :P
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December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw, I just realized that was really the end. Oh well, most good things come to an end.
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November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gah...
I love you for writing this!
The smut, the angst, the flff, just gah!
Thank you!
I love you for writing this!
The smut, the angst, the flff, just gah!
Thank you!
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November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You truly are the epitome of a superb writer. The range of emotion in your story is beautiful. You had me grinning, -cough-thinking other things-cough, sobbing (at the end of chapter 6) and then grinning again. I really fell in love with your characters and found them to be believable, a trait so many stories pass over for slutty antics. You have rocked my world and I love you for it!