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*whines like an eight year old* you're sooooooooooo mean leaving it like that!!!! *cries* UPDATE UPDATE!!!pretty please?? *bats eyelashes*

Read both Love Me updates and Best of Friends in one go. Have I mentioned that I love your writing style? Because I really really do. Most authors treat cute like it’s the plague or something and few of those who dare to try it out do it well. It takes a special kind of talent to write cute without becoming cloying and eliciting eye rolls at some point and you’ve got it in spades. Love all your stories! Oh and my condolences for the car-thing... been there, done that, got the tee-shirt (and huge insurance premium to show for it) so I think I’m qualified to say I know how you feel and I sympathise -_-

oh, can't van see that this is his chance to get over this fears... I hope you do have something up your sleave :)

what?!!?!?

Hello~! I just found this looking for something to read, and was rewarded. The stupid AFF downtime occurred when I clicked from ch. 5, however, so I think I got unreasonably angry at the poor website.

This is very cute! Van especially is adorable, like his tendency to clap and giggle and act wickedly delighted by things. Kale can be cute, but his tendency to cry over things makes me want to punch him. That's harsh, but hey, at least he's evoking a reaction! If this is a side-story, I will definitely read your main stories.

You have a fun writing style, with many clever descriptions. When I actually noticed you describing Van as a 'bluenette' I snickered madly. Mm~ aside from that, I guessed that Van had probably had Matthew die on him, but I hadn't expected Kale to be so-- himself. Telling Van he'll help himm move on, and it'll make them both stronger? I think my mouth fell open. It's very realistic, well-meant, and complete bullshit. You don't say things like that to someone who just opened up to you, idiot! (The idiot being Kale. Not you, obviously. It makes for good drama from a writing perspective, just from a me-perspective it makes me mad at him. Characters like Kale make me volatile... Which, hey, is good.)

So... enough ranting. I'm going to actually sleep now, since it's 2 AM. Looking forward to the end of this! Even with my hangups about Kale. Van is adorable! There, good note to end on.

hello honey! i love your story, finally a pushy uke. it's about time. even though this chapter seems a little cliche, i still can't wait to see what happens next. so please hurry with the next chapie!! (at first i thought matthew might be van's pimp =P). and what about van's clothes, shouldn't he come back for those? he's gonna run out of the colors of the rainbow eventually ~___^

He never saw the blue-haired boy again. < -- isn't that a bit final and sad?

Lol, now that really was an evil ending :p I can't wait to read more but I realy hope you do have a trick up your sleeve as if not that'd just be too depressing, lol ;)

(I have way too much free time to review twice, lol) - the final line; "He never saw the blue-haired boy again."
Is this going to be a game of semantics? Like he never saw the "blue-haired" boy because Van let his hair go back to his natural colour, in order that Kale trusts him and sees a part of him no one else does? Hmm, I should stop trying to guess what happens next really, lol, I'm probably wrong anyway. Update soon ;)

Hello Lunarwench,

I like this story. Really like it. You're style is easy to read and enjoy. And the sex is hot! *g* And I like Van and Kale very much.

Though that ending was kinda cruel. My first thought was "Did she forget a "He thought" like in "He thought he'd never see the blue-haired boy again." The second was: "Or did she have an urge to die from being mauled by her readers?!" Then my brain started to work again properly and I registered that you wrote "blue-haired". So I guess Van is colouring his hair for a new start with Kale. Or better: I hope so. Or: I demand it that way! Green would be nice... And if you dare to break them apart, I will seek you out and yeah... make you write a happy end! ;-)

And no, I'm not violent, even if it seems after that tirade... :D

Hope to read the end soon and yeah: I like your other stories too (the slashy ones at least)!
Nathaniel