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for New World

by CarnalSin

person Lena
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hiya:DD I really like this story & think you should update quick!! Great Start:)))
person bree
schedule February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
write more
person Rosei
schedule January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1

Like the New World you've set up.
(I mean I don't like it but you've done
a really good job with your intro!!)

It's dramatic and kinda fun at the same time,
so, write, write, write!!!

Thanks,
R
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sounds pretty good. Can't help but wonder how Shiv's gonna take it!
person papu
schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow, this is really good
person Ro
schedule October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This seems like it has real potential. I love the setting of post apoc. Warriors, prison love, its all seems to make for fun times. Keep updating.
person Aleks
schedule October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice start so I´m waiting for more!
person Layla
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hm. This story has definately piqued my interest. :3 Can't wait to see the next chapter.
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice cant wait 2 c more
person Ryuukai
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice start this would make a great film i think