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January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello SuchR0... l33t name! ;-)
This story is cool. I like especially how the characters are thinking and interacting. The mixture between shyness, need and attraction is... realistic and interesting :-) The angst is there but in an enjoyable amount!
I really like to see how the relationship will progress (Hooray for taking turns in bed... *hint, hint* :D), though there is one thing that is troubling me: Your update speed. I know it's your story and all and that I should be glad that you're (hopefully) still writing, but yeah... Perhaps once a month? :-)
Anyway, keep writing!
Nathaniel
This story is cool. I like especially how the characters are thinking and interacting. The mixture between shyness, need and attraction is... realistic and interesting :-) The angst is there but in an enjoyable amount!
I really like to see how the relationship will progress (Hooray for taking turns in bed... *hint, hint* :D), though there is one thing that is troubling me: Your update speed. I know it's your story and all and that I should be glad that you're (hopefully) still writing, but yeah... Perhaps once a month? :-)
Anyway, keep writing!
Nathaniel
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October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think you do 'fluffy angst' quite well : )
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October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
All of your stories are really good. No, I mean really, really good. If you were in a bookstore, I'd buy you.
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October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hm. An interesting style of writing, though enjoyable nonetheless.
It reminds me of the typical yaoi manga novel one would read. The characters and the underlying stuff, that is. Ehhhhh.
So. Keep going. :]
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It reminds me of the typical yaoi manga novel one would read. The characters and the underlying stuff, that is. Ehhhhh.
So. Keep going. :]
♥
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October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooohohoho.
Nobody.
Smoooth.
Keep going. :]
Nobody.
Smoooth.
Keep going. :]