rate_review Reviews

That was a beautiful story. I cried.

Wow. That was a powerful story. Very good, even though I hate the way it ended...I prefer happy endings in my entertainment since reality doesn't have that many of them. Still, it was a good story, and now you have me listening to Stellastar. ^_^

I felt robbed. Cheated. Betrayed. Robbed! How, just how can it be like that? I thought at least once Gray found out he would feel remorse and heartbroken because I believed he was controlled/abused by his brother. I thought that he would release the depth of his love or at least attack his brother for making him become the way he is now. Or something. I then became angry at him for indirectly ending a life. I was satisfied that he at least recognized that he was cruel. Bastard!

I bought Caleb's action. He was a person who experienced many lost in his young life and this blow was just to great for him to manage with his previous coping technique. He needed a quick fix and having no familial or friend's support, he didn't think. He lost lost all hope, tomorrow could only bring more tragedies.

The stories was heading toward such a HEA ending that I was feeling much like Caleb when he came home to his empty apartment. I thought Gray and Caleb would work it out with Gray apologizing to Caleb and proving himself once again worthy but nope, I was robbed! They were too weak for each other. They could have been great together but one was weaker than the other. I hate understanding the imperfections of my characters and it's only with a well-written story that I was able to eventually do so. Gosh, why? Robbed, I say, robbed!

A fan,
renee

*bawls eyes out for several hours*

How could you!? *cries more*

that just broke my heart.
i started sobbing after i read the last chapter.
it is a testement to how good of a writer you are that i got so attached to the characters and you were able to depict the emotions so clearly and poigantly that they grab the reader
but god, i really really hate you right now.
'fluffy angst' my ass.
it really is beautifully written though and one of the best stories i've ever read.

im gonna go cry more now. i hope you're happy.

Hello Such Romantic Eyes!

I don't like the last chapter. Not because it's style is bad. Or because you made many mistakes. Or the characters are described in a bad way. No, all that is really fine.

But it's soooo sad! I was hoping for a nice end with lot's of smut and yeah. Yeah I'm sappy like that. This end, though it is realistic, is not what I was hoping for. And you surprised me with it, too!

*sighs* Gray is a real fucker! Yeah, that he is...

Anyway, it was a real good story. I hope you keep writing, though I wouldn't hold it against if your next story actually has a happy end ;-)

Greetings and thank you for this nice piece of art
Nathaniel

omgosh sooo good!
but way sad.
please make a spin off or something where they get to stay together!!!

Hello again, SuchR0m4nticEy3s *double checks to see if he has written it correctly*!

That's an update speed I can live with. Few days are fine :-)

That chapter was fine - really hot to be honest. The gentle lovemaking (at least at the beginning) was well written, I liked it very much. And the Caleb's changes are completely fine with me. Gods, I'm such a sucker for WAFFiness, it's almost embarassing ;-)

As for my stories... Honestly I haven't published one. Not sure if it's worth a try. But I could propose a deal: You keep updating often and perhaps I'll try one. ;-P

Anyway, I'm anxious to read more of Caleb and Gray!
Nathaniel

I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed reading this story and am looking forward to seeing how the relationship develops. Keep up the good work!