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Evie, you must have some kind of key to my adolescent school fantasies - lol! It's all in there - the hot teacher, the spanking in front of the class, succeeding ritual humiliation, and the little touch of kindness at the end.

So glad you chose to update this! And Marber is one of my favourite contemporary playwrights too - 'Closer' is brilliant, and I love 'Dealers Choice' as well. Many,many lovely little touches that make it so real, even if plainly fantasy. Who didn't have a collage like that on their folder at some point. Great choices too - Rickman (swoon), Isaacs, Depp...though I'd leave out Bloom. Mangirl! LOL.

This makes me smile. Keep going!

I liked the story of Rebecca...A lot of girls are like her, I was not one of them though. But anyway...it was really sweet that she clung to Mr. Holden, hugging at the end. I would like to see them together as a couple. I loved how shocked that she was about him using the old-fashioned cane! I wish you had described what Mr. Holden looked like though. I was under the impression he was young.

Just finished reading Chapter 2 and I must say, Mr. H. is CRUEL! But at least he apologized afterwards. I'm looking forward to reading Chapter three but right now it's kind of late where I am and I've gotta get up early for work in the morning so I'll leave you another review when I'm done with the third chapter.

Yay! A schoolgirl spanking story, my favorite! You did such a nice job on it too.

I love how Mr. Holden just scares the crap out of everybody with a surprise inspection. And Rebecca’s so lippy, how funny! Then Holden lectures her and he sounds so strict. Then he uses a cane to punish her. Yikes, that sounds like it hurts! It does seem to have curbed some of Rebecca’s recklessness though. Great job!

Lovely spanking story my dear!!

Yay, a story by Evie...why do I get the feeling I'm going to like it? LOL.

This is a lovely story - you do a great job of making Rebecca this overconfident, arrogant brat that thinks she can get away with murder if she just flashes a smile. I do like a flawed heroine. And Mr H is sexay!

Your caning scene is lusciously done; I can feel the burn! This was so much fun to read, and I thought the attention to detail really brought it to life. Rebecca and her friends come across as real people, which is always good to see.

I hope you'll write some more - this story or another one. Great job xx.

Good story, I think Mr. H. could really be a great influence in Rebecca's life, maybe even her lover if you decide to continue this story.