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I actually had to register to review this fic because it's that good :D

Please please PLEASE update soon!! I must check here at least 3 times a day to see if you have yet :S

Wow. I acctually really like this story. That was an awful place to leave off on! Engaged? Not good... not good at all. And she lost her virginity to him! He's in for it now...

Can't believe he made her stand with her skirt and panties down in the corner. I could have never done that, I think I would have run away.

And I am so jelous that your parents know Jason Iseccs (and now I have spelled his name wrong, and to lazy to go look it up before I post this). If my parents knew Alan Rickman, my life would be complete. Haha.

Wow, (Alan in Robin Hood or Die Hard would be slightly better- but Love Acctually is still good. Even if he is older then my parents!... by ten years) about your dad's best friend.

So, still a wonderful story. She needs to make sure he breaks it off with his fiance before she falls... to hard.

Chapter 4

Ah thanks Evie, you described St Georges for me. You’re a sweetie! It sounds so majestic and romantic! I love her eagles view from the roof!

I find it amusing that Rebecca is a little bit on the slothy side. She really is a girl after my own heart. Super tidy people kind of scare me. Of course, I’m surprised Mr. Holden didn’t make a comment on it though.

So Mr. Holden smokes too. What a bad boy. Of course we suspected that anyway. Lol
And that was a very nice smut interlude as well.

Fun chapter my dear! Keep up the great work!

Poor Rebecca, she’s really quite lonely isn’t she? Left alone to spend the holiday by herself. :-(

You did answer one question for me, I was wondering what the drinking age was in the UK. Here in the US it’s twenty-one practically everywhere. Of course I’m not sure completely. It’s hard to tell with fifty states and all of them with different drinking laws.

That was another delicious smut interlude! I would like to hear Rebecca’s story though on how she learned to give such excellent head. Lol

I also liked your question and answer dialog, the end was a real shocker though. Whoa, I bet Rebecca isn’t going to be too happy with that news.

Great job again!

Thanks again for the nice words on Nomads! You’re a sweetie!

Oh NO, Holden's TAKEN! Hardly surprising, what with him being a red hot god of sex and all that. Poor Rebecca though :-(.

Very funny, the thought of her shouting "Great shag, Jacky-boy" across the school hall. I sense a little bit of vulnerability underneath Rebecca's brash exterior. And I really wonder what's going on with Holden? Is he just a predator, or does he really care for her?

To be honest, I'm not exactly sure about how the beta thing is done. LOL, make an offer, think about it later. I think you just email me your chapter as a Word doc and I tweak the spelling and email it back to you. My address is on my author page if you want to.

Great chapter - the story gets twisty and the characters get deeper. Whatever next?

This is lovely, lovely, delicious. Naughty Holden, sneaking around on the roof with a packet of fags. And a great romantic setting up there too.

I love how the characters are three-dimensional (though there's still a lot we don't know about Holden) and the smut is stylishly done.

Your enjoyment in writing this really shines through - and it's just as enjoyable to read. I get a little bit excitable every time I see you've updated.

Wow, I came back to review chapter 2 and now I see you have a chapter 3. Wish I could write so fast!

Chapter 2

So Rebecca gets spanked and has to do corner time, in front of the whole class! How fun! Mr. Holden is so strict! Lol
I guess Rebecca won’t be late for any of her classes anytime soon. I had to laugh at your reference to Jane Eyre. because I was just reading something the other day, that insisted that book was a BDSM story in disguise. They even listed several reasons as to why. Maybe I should actually read it, I never have, although I am familiar with the story.

I’m somewhat fascinated with notoriously cold St Georges. I’d actually love it if you gave a little bit more description. I kept wondering about the bathroom. Is there just one bathtub or several? Is the school well lit with windows or is it dark? Does it echo in the halls? Sorry, I’m a pest aren’t I? It’s just you’ve developed this wonderfully decedent fantasy school and I want to know more.

So now that they’ve kissed? What’s going to happen next! This is most definitely a fun story! Keep it coming!

Chapter 3

Wow! Rebecca’s so cheeky, turning in a picture of Mr. Holden with an Adolf mustache. I guess she likes be spanked doesn’t she?

Then she sneaks into his office! How funny! She must have known she would be caught. She might as well be wearing a sign, saying “please spank me” around her neck. Lol

I get the feeling though, Mr. Holden enjoyed it as much as she did. Are there going to be some lemons next chapter I wonder? lol

Ha ha, Holden is such a rogue! But I think Rebecca is smart enough to turn the tables on him somewhere along the line. (Though not THAT smart, with the Hitler moustache - LOL!) I love the romance of an evening discussing the Night of the Long Knives (incidentally, is Holden a History teacher? What's happened to the superbly-named Mr Krackle?)

I love Rebecca's blend of awe and disrespect. It's just the thing to turn him on. Have to mention - I forgot to say in your last review but that Jane Eyre comment made me laugh out loud. 'It's like Jane Eyre, except Jane didn't do anything wrong'. I loved that.

If you ever want a beta reader (kind of like an editor) just give me a shout & I'll polish the spelling & grammar for you.

Great story and all the quick updates are a real treat. xx