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Hahaha -- Well the real name of my high school wasn’t “Cow Pie High.” We students just called it that because it was in the middle of nowhere. The real name is actually the tiny town I grew up in. Winters there were harsh and we would get humongous snowdrifts that would bury one whole side of the school. You could hear the principal over the intercom telling students to stay off the roof, while the pitter-patter of feet echoed overhead. I never went up there myself though. I was such a boring good girl. Being paddled was not something I wanted back then. Lol
Anyway, enough about me.

Wonderful chapter my dear! Now I finally know what teachers are doing when they don’t show up to class. I actually used to love that and would never have gone looking for the teacher. I know why Rebecca goes though.
Lol

So Holden’s fiancée is 5’11. Good lord, she’s tall! And it sounds like she is pressuring Holden to get married now. He really shouldn’t agree to this if doesn’t want to. I mean, marriage is forever, at least it is supposed to be.

Holden was pretty strict making her do corner time, write lines and take a caning. I guess he’s really worried that Rebecca might spill the beans if she doesn’t learn to think before she speaks. It must have gnawed at her though to have to ask for her own punishment.

Anyway, keep up the great work!!

I haven't reviewed in a while, which is bad of me. I was so insanely happy when I saw this story was updated. This is the first weekend I have stayed at school- and it's (of course) the first weekend most of my friends have gone home. And since I don't have anyone like Holden, I don't have much to do (besides school work, but I'm saving that for Sunday at midnight).

Holden is really pissing me off with the whole fiance thing. He needs to dump her so baddly, I feel so sorry for Beth! She needs to take a stand and not have sex with him until he does! *starts to laugh* Like that would ever happen, he's HOT!

Every since you said this was based on a real teacher (and a situation you _wish_ was happening), I've really wanted to see your teacher! Snap a picture of him! hahaha. That would be brilliant!

Until next chapter,
-Elle

I have no idea why I wrote Beth... how weird...

Bex or Rebecca***

Hey Evie, I’m sorry I didn’t review sooner. I don’t know how I missed your update.

So this is based off a real school eh? How fascinating! Since I went to public school here in the US, boarding school seems like another world and I have always wondered what it was like. My school was in a small rural community and we called it Cow Pie High! Lol
But anyway, I am sure you don’t want to hear about me.

So lets talk about your wonderful chapter! I am glad the ‘batteries’ are not going to say anything. I can just imagine how shocked they were stumbling in on Rebecca and Mr. Holden like that. Do you really think they will be able to keep the secret? I mean this is hot gossip.

I’m very worried that Rebecca cuts on herself to relieve stress. That’s a scary thing! And that’s horrible what her parents did, just leaving her like that without discussing it or anything. I hope she finds another way to relieve her anxiety.

So what is going to happen now? Mr. Holden must know now that Rebecca is very vulnerable. I’m worried now.

Excellent writing. I am really loving the story and I think you handle the awkward situation scenes very well. keep writing.

Oh, poor you with your History teacher - it's hell, isn't it? I had a thing for my A-Level English teacher; he wasn't anything like Holden, but he did give me a LOT of positive attention (not in a creepy way!), which is what I think it was about really. Of course, being stuck in the same building twenty four seven must make it that much more intense.

Poor Bex; Holden must have known that 'pretend' finishing it with her like that might be a high-risk tactic. I'm not sure he fully understands the implications of getting involved with a much younger girl. He could have been more sensitive.

Well, where will it go from here? Holden has to make a decision and soon - job/fiancee or Rebecca.

How funny! So Holden has finally confronted Rebecca about her slothy habits. I was wondering when that was going to happen. I myself always feel much more comfortable if the place is just a little bit messy though. Perfection scares me.

Now of course, if I burned a hole in the carpet, I would be in so much trouble. I don’t even like to think about it. Indeed, my sweetie would be sooo furious and I would be getting the fire lecture and ‘what were you thinking’ scold, for years to come. Consequently, I’m very careful about what I leave on and Rebecca should be too. Holden seems to be training her though, punishing her with the hairbrush.

This was a lovely chapter though Evie! Just keep them coming!!

Oops, that's torn it! Just as Rebecca was possibly heading towards a different kind of carpet burn too.

I did enjoy Holden making her clean her room (and the description of the messy room was so hilariously true-to-teen-life as well). And his hairbrush-wielding too.

What's going to happen now? Exposure? Shame? More spanking, hopefully! Thanks for the update.

Hey sweetie, don’t feel like you have to rush and update everyday. Work at your own pace, really.

I loved all the reasons Holden told Rebecca why he loved her. They were all the reasons he spanks her for. Lol

I take it Rebecca is a very good rider. Wow – that sounds like quite a jump! I also thought that was a very inventive spanking too. Great job! And it was with a riding crop too! I’m glad to see that even though Holden loves her, he still hasn’t lost his strict touch.

Keep up the great work!

Mmm, riding crops...*drifts off into imagination*...Funny that; I've got a hot riding scene coming up in one of my stories; I promise I wrote it before I read this, so I'm not copying! I'm glad they made up, but Holden needs to ditch the fiancee (sensitively, of course, if he's capable of that,lol).

I love that riding gear equalled kinky sex on a hay bale for Rebecca (it would for me too). And that line about her tears not being the dignified tears of a movie icon was CLASSIC! What teenage girl doesn't try to practise crying movie-star-style? So full of lovely touches I can't list them all. This is great, and please don't feel you have to update every day. Of course, I've loved the quick updates, but I know it can sometimes take a little while to find the time and the inspiration to carry on. Best of luck xx.