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January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
come onnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you're killin me here. i keep checking for an update and there HASN'T BEEN ONE!!!! >:| I am a very needy reader and you aren't giving me my fix mannnn. lmao, on a more serious note: please do update soon, I am very much anticipating what happens next. :) AND if you do, I'll give you a cookie!! oh and out of curiosity, would you please tell something about yourself, your profile doesn't give any infor about you and i'm curious about the writer of this awesome story :P thanks!
~cj
~cj
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January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
woot! I was the first review for 2008!!! Go me :P
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December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story!
The plot is great!
I hope you will post more soon and finish this sometimes!!
The plot is great!
I hope you will post more soon and finish this sometimes!!
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December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. You have beautifully rich characters that most "sex-plot" stories seem to leave out. The way you make the main woman strong without making her sound too much like an all powerful goddess--also in the since that you don't make her soo weak that she has to rely wholey on the main man...er men. =^-^=
There were parts, or at least just to me, where I was confused who was talking but after taking into account each character's personality I was able to reread the confusing parts and figure out who was saying what.
Your jokes are duely noted, and I want more of them! ;p I love your sense of humor and the sarcastic nature of your characters.
P.S. Yey for the Renessianse (its late, give my spelling a break) woman build! I am glad that the main character is not the size of a toothpick!
P.S.S. I love also your section about her talking about medical reasons for vampires and about Hunter's eye "conditions."
There were parts, or at least just to me, where I was confused who was talking but after taking into account each character's personality I was able to reread the confusing parts and figure out who was saying what.
Your jokes are duely noted, and I want more of them! ;p I love your sense of humor and the sarcastic nature of your characters.
P.S. Yey for the Renessianse (its late, give my spelling a break) woman build! I am glad that the main character is not the size of a toothpick!
P.S.S. I love also your section about her talking about medical reasons for vampires and about Hunter's eye "conditions."
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December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMFG O_O I WANT TO KILL THAT GOVERNESS BITCH!! >.<
You updated, oh I love you so much!
PLEASE update soon!! I am sooooooooooooooooooooo addicted to this story!!!
And I'm also reading your othe story, Maid to Lust.
I love your stories, and I love you!!!!
~CelticKnot~
You updated, oh I love you so much!
PLEASE update soon!! I am sooooooooooooooooooooo addicted to this story!!!
And I'm also reading your othe story, Maid to Lust.
I love your stories, and I love you!!!!
~CelticKnot~
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December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome.
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December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is the most beautiful peice of writing I think I've ever read! Your prose reminds me of Emily Bronte.
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December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is great so far, where did you come up with the name Lo?
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December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like how you described the things that came to take shelly away
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December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
have you been planning the name relationships since the beginning?