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March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this sotry
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March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm really liking this so far. Hunter is an attractive character, and your heroine is great. Your making me want to read on, and for someone like me that's a good accomplishment.
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March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy SHIT that was good! So my friend has a faerie friend (yes, we believe in faeries, don't think we're crazy) and Hunter INSANELY reminded me of him, so I was reading this story as sort of a laugh. But your writing is fantastic and I'm sucked into the story now! Please update soon, this is too good to leave a cliffhanger for too long
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March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've just discovered this story and it's quite compelling. BUt that last chapter, well, quite an unexpected turn of events! Interesting, however, and definitely has my interest piqued. I will be checking back for more on this story. Thanks!
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March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*triumphant fanfare plays*
Congratulations on making me happy!
Congratulations, Congratulations!
CON-GRAT-U-LATIONS!!!!
^^ Conrad's back, Conrad's back!
Hunter's Back! Hunter's Back!
*smtohers them both in equal amoutns of kisses and hugs and dry humps Hunter's leg* XD
I think this has been much of an improvement.
For a second there, ya really had me going. I honestly thought she was going to die because she started out with a simple nose-bleed, than it led to her bleeding all over the fucking place and boy wa sI in a doozy and ready to strangle you if you killed Shelia/Ophelia off.
But you saved my brain! You saved it! Ahahahaha!
Oh, I still Hate her Grandmother though. Don't ask why. I just do. I just do.
It's a random hatred, but I just do.
Also, I didn't quite understand whay all the people were scremaing good t hings and bad things back and forth about Shelia/Ophelia.
Like how she should be left to die...what was that about?
Also, where WAS Hunter?
Where was my sexy Fae man beast that you just have to fuck and dry hump over-over-over-over-and motherfucking over again.
Pardon my langauge,
Took you long enough.
Sincerely yours,
The Mad Hatter.
Congratulations on making me happy!
Congratulations, Congratulations!
CON-GRAT-U-LATIONS!!!!
^^ Conrad's back, Conrad's back!
Hunter's Back! Hunter's Back!
*smtohers them both in equal amoutns of kisses and hugs and dry humps Hunter's leg* XD
I think this has been much of an improvement.
For a second there, ya really had me going. I honestly thought she was going to die because she started out with a simple nose-bleed, than it led to her bleeding all over the fucking place and boy wa sI in a doozy and ready to strangle you if you killed Shelia/Ophelia off.
But you saved my brain! You saved it! Ahahahaha!
Oh, I still Hate her Grandmother though. Don't ask why. I just do. I just do.
It's a random hatred, but I just do.
Also, I didn't quite understand whay all the people were scremaing good t hings and bad things back and forth about Shelia/Ophelia.
Like how she should be left to die...what was that about?
Also, where WAS Hunter?
Where was my sexy Fae man beast that you just have to fuck and dry hump over-over-over-over-and motherfucking over again.
Pardon my langauge,
Took you long enough.
Sincerely yours,
The Mad Hatter.
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March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I liked that.
Ok so I might have said this to you before, but I like your story because I can totally relate to the main character (We're on the same career path. or at least she was.) So this makes it easier for me to get into your story. Plus her male friends seem hot *drool*. I miss the Fey dude. Yay Conrad is back!!!
Ok so I might have said this to you before, but I like your story because I can totally relate to the main character (We're on the same career path. or at least she was.) So this makes it easier for me to get into your story. Plus her male friends seem hot *drool*. I miss the Fey dude. Yay Conrad is back!!!
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March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi-hi!! :-)
It's been a while since I've been to this story. By the time I did come back you had put up an author's note saying you were quitting your stories in order to write a book. So I didn't read anymore, not wanting to get my hopes up. But then... you updated!! Yay!!!!! So happy. Anyway, down to the review, and comment to your reply to my last review.
Review:
So I had to go back and read chapter ten and then eleven, but then that's where I stopped, (For the time being. I'll be going back to the next chapters. Just had to stop for a moment to leave this review and then go eat because I'm starving. That's irrellevant anyway...) So now I'm getting back into the swing of things and still am enjoying it. I'll leave another review though when I'm all caught up.
Comment to your comment to my last review:
Um, I must really apologize. I really really really did not mean to come off as if I was saying that you were copying anything. That isn't what I was saying at all honestly. I was just saying that it (and I quote my words) "for a second" reminded me of that story. Not saying you copied it at all, because both your stories are different. *sighs* Anyway, I really apologize if I came off that way. I honestly didn't mean it in that way at all. Your story(ies) are very unique and different and I enjoy all the twist and turns and anything else you're throwing into them. You're a great authoress. Very happy you're continuing.
It's been a while since I've been to this story. By the time I did come back you had put up an author's note saying you were quitting your stories in order to write a book. So I didn't read anymore, not wanting to get my hopes up. But then... you updated!! Yay!!!!! So happy. Anyway, down to the review, and comment to your reply to my last review.
Review:
So I had to go back and read chapter ten and then eleven, but then that's where I stopped, (For the time being. I'll be going back to the next chapters. Just had to stop for a moment to leave this review and then go eat because I'm starving. That's irrellevant anyway...) So now I'm getting back into the swing of things and still am enjoying it. I'll leave another review though when I'm all caught up.
Comment to your comment to my last review:
Um, I must really apologize. I really really really did not mean to come off as if I was saying that you were copying anything. That isn't what I was saying at all honestly. I was just saying that it (and I quote my words) "for a second" reminded me of that story. Not saying you copied it at all, because both your stories are different. *sighs* Anyway, I really apologize if I came off that way. I honestly didn't mean it in that way at all. Your story(ies) are very unique and different and I enjoy all the twist and turns and anything else you're throwing into them. You're a great authoress. Very happy you're continuing.
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March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Keep it comin'
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March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!!
I've been reading this story since the very beginning and it is one of the main stories I made a point to follow. Then you start a second story, which turns out to be just as good.
Then, bomb shell - you decided to stop writing, not just 1 - but BOTH STORIES. HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO ME!!!
Now, you expect me to follow these stories again and review, because you have granted me a chapter or two. Well, I can only say ........ NO PROBLEM. HURRY, HURRY, HURRY, THE STORIES ARE BACK ON.
Well, at least I'm hoping they're back on because you have not lost a thing. I really didn't think Shelia was going to stay with her grandmother. Also, I thought the guys would see her way sooner that a YEAR LATER, WOW!! I love the picking of the thorne scene that was great.
Don't think I didn't notice Conrad call her his "bride". Can't wait for more info on this.
Can't wait for the next chapter, please don't break my heart - update.
I've been reading this story since the very beginning and it is one of the main stories I made a point to follow. Then you start a second story, which turns out to be just as good.
Then, bomb shell - you decided to stop writing, not just 1 - but BOTH STORIES. HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO ME!!!
Now, you expect me to follow these stories again and review, because you have granted me a chapter or two. Well, I can only say ........ NO PROBLEM. HURRY, HURRY, HURRY, THE STORIES ARE BACK ON.
Well, at least I'm hoping they're back on because you have not lost a thing. I really didn't think Shelia was going to stay with her grandmother. Also, I thought the guys would see her way sooner that a YEAR LATER, WOW!! I love the picking of the thorne scene that was great.
Don't think I didn't notice Conrad call her his "bride". Can't wait for more info on this.
Can't wait for the next chapter, please don't break my heart - update.
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March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like things so far, I would like to know a little more about the hierarchy of the different races in the next chapter if you can.