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November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't really have a favourite part just yet, but i'm loving this story so far. I can't wait to see what you do with the vampire dude
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November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch.5 Oh my god! I can't believe he called her fat.oooooh, she should have hit him in the face. I love your characters especially Hunter, he is so realistic, not like the dime-a-dozen male characters who are worshipping the ground the female role walks on and wants marriage by now. Still, nice touch with the fat-name calling! ;)
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November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! My favorite part is when Hunter is trying to stop himself before he gets to close to Sheila.It makes it so much fun!!! Update soon!
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November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter, please update soon.
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October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's good to see a good Fey story, there aren't many around here, and yours is exceptional. However...you write a lot like another writer who used to be on this site a while back who also wrote about the "Fey" Really flowery, with lots of imagery and decription...Hmm...I'm not trying to get you in trouble if you are this unmentionable writer, because I was always a fan of your work, soooooooooooo....<3
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October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hmm interesting
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October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm totally loving this story! You've built up the characters awesomely. The way the story flows with smooth and intriguing. AND I love the way you set up the tension! Keep on updating! Please!
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October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this story is off to a great start. I hopw ypu continue writing!
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October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just read those last two chapters they are so awesome can't wait to see what happens when Con makes his appearance