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November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy reading this story, I can't wait till you give us another update. I think this is a story I will be able to stick with, because I am super picky at what I read, and this has caught my attention, from the first 2 chapters, till now.
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November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Omg, that was superb and totally amazing. I can totally see Shelly getting together with Con if he can just get over his jealously over her having his features.
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November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This reminds me a lot of WhiteFlameKitsune's work, the characters, the plot, the summary, pretty much everthing.
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November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Looking forward to your next chapter.
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November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! conrad is incredible vain!! I mean I can imagine that he would be but to decide he didnt want her becuase of it is surprising and quite a twist! I cant wait for the next chapter!
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November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this series its great so far.
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November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like the twist... i was worried about how hunter would have to deal with con but you managed to fix that immediately. the narcissistic views of con don't surprise me at all...oh and please have a little hunter action coming...I'm waiting in immense anticipation :)
Update Soon!!!!!
-cj
Update Soon!!!!!
-cj
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November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! The reviwer above is totally right! You do remind me a lot of WhiteFlameKitsune! Ah! If it is you, i'm so glad you're back, and if it isn't, people saying you write like WFK is SUCH a compliment! anyway, my fav part would have to bee the unconventional weight of Shelly. It's so great to have a story where the main girl isn;t "A raven haired, slender beauty with perfect breasts and a kickass ability"...so frekin nice not to have that, your girl actually is intelligent, and uses that in her favor. nice. UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!
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November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I get sad When i get to the end of it. Very good.. no no Awesome. Spectacular piece of work. Keep it going, This is by far the best story I have read in quite some time.
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November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh gosh this is just wonderful. Cannot wait to read more!