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I really do love where this story is headed. In Con her father perhaps? I wonder when she'll make Hunter snap, I'm sure that is going to be one amazing break. Can't wait for more, you should update soon!

loveeeee it!!! its quickly becoming one of my favs!

Wow, what a GREAT story!!
I love Shelly, you didn't make her compeletly perfect and that's what make her character so beleivable. I love the her ability to think of those come back line for Hunter. Her last lines for Hunter in chapter 5 were the best. I'm a bit confused why Con was so mad at her over the "eyes" thing, but hey - all the better for Shelly and Hunter. As for Hunter, I don't know why he is tied to Con, but I look forward to finding out. Until then I love that he finds himself completely attracted to Shelly. They have great chemistry.

Please update soon.

Why is she so angry at Hunter (you know aside from that whole kidnapping thing) he has no control over Conrads response. Did you originally intend for Conrad to be the romantic intrest because the original summary suggested that or did you intend hunter all along?

AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Update!!

wow--wonderful story! i look forward to an update! i dont think ive read such an enthralling story on adultfanfiction.net or anywhere for that matter. the plot the story the characters--c'est manifique! tu es tre bien! god bless you! ive been needing to read a story like this forever!

The first two chapters were great...I like how strong and self sufficient you have made your leading female character...I can't wait to see how far she will go with her kidnapper before he takes her to his boss...great job so far...i promise to keep reading and reviewing...

in chapter 1 you said she was 150 and in chapter 4 you said she was 160. not that it really matters, but when i write i like to know if i contridict myself...good job on the story...

You need to update like now because this story is so good.

Please oh please update again. This story is fabulous. :D I love Conrad's reaction. I hope Hunter will be able to open up to Shelly soon!