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Aaaa, that was unexpected. Please update soon, I want to find out what happens next. I love the way this is all playing out.

Wow! What a chapter! Sorry that I haven't reviewed any other chapters yet, but I'm a college student majoring in English and double minoring in History and Journalism. Needless, to say I don't usually have a lot of time, between class,homework, studying, and also working. I'm really kind of torn up about who I support, Conrad or Hunter. On the one hand Hunter is amazingly sexy and those hypnotic eyes could probably have any woman give themselves up to him. However, Conrad seems very cold, haughty, and distant, and I'm really looking forward to learning some more about him. Hmm...Conrad or Hunter...such choices. lol.I always tend to support the cold and distant, if not arrogant men. I couldn't tell you why. Well in any case, I can't wait to find out what happens next. I hope Sheila is ok. lol. Please update soon. This story is very interesting and well thought out. Thanks for writing, and thanks for updating. I appreciate it!

so i'm leaving on sunday morning(at like 4) for a trip to costa rica and i'll be gone for like 9 days...with no computer/internet access. do you think you could PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update before I have to go...i've been checking everyday to see if you've updated to just be sorely dissapointed every time...do you think it'd be possible for a new chapter to come out either tom. or sat? ~cj

Oh, very smoothly done! I was wondering how you were going to manage to keep her out of vain Vamp boy's clutches. I'm really enjoying your characters-submissive is sexy in its own way. But as a writer who's apparently incapable of keeping my own female character's from kicking or button pushing, I love stories with strong, competent women. Thanks for the great read!

You blow all other Adultfanfic writers out of the water. bravo. encore. encore!

oh p[lease please pleae ...PLEASE!!!!!!!! update!! i love it i was laughing along. I almost cried (grr to that tearing makes me feel sappy) YAY for the girl that's not a fricking size 6 YAY YAY YAY. I'm so happy he doesn't want her...because I love Hunter...Con is such a ...gaw just makes me want to hit him or myself over the head. I love the story so far most because no random fucking....there is a storyline, and our girl here has some class and a punch. so yes ocne again I ask out of my love of reading very well written stories....PLEASE UPDATE!

Ohh this story is really really good. please continue writing this - I'd like to know how it turns out. What does it mean now that Conrad doesn't want Shelly anymore? Why can't she and Hunter be together now? They're so fucking hot together it's insane. I can't wait for an update!

awesome job! I love it to pieces!

Wow. I've got to say, I am very impressed. I don't come across near enough plot in this genre, and this plot is GOOD. Just one tiny criticism, hopefully of the constructive variety: there are several spots where your characters have good luck--like where Shelly manages to get out of the duct tape and bungees, and then finds a car with the keys in it. I have to admit that I wanted her escape to be a little more difficult, to give her a chance to show the reader that great intelligence she's got. But really, that's the only thing I can think of that didn't make me go, "Oooh, yay!" Vair eager to see what you do with this.

This story is badass. <3 I've been reading since the first chapter and I am completely and utterly in love.

I love the way you made Conrad into a total princess, huffing and puffing and throwing a hissy fit, Hunter his caretaker laughing at it all. It's quite fun. Write Faster. I'm eager for more. :D