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Oh my gosh Love this story hope you keep the work coming. i thought it was a lost cause a while ago sense you never update but now that your back im bouncing again.

Keep up the great work hun

It would be good. I mean you don't have to answer each one word for word...but you can kinda sum everything? what's every easy for you! and the answer to two...Hunter!!!

i just love your stories. you are awesome. my favorite character is Hunter, i always loved fairies !

Oh my gosh! I just read your whole story in one sitting. It's amazing! I comb through AFF to find little (well, not so little at 15 chapters and growing) gems like this! I think I'd have to say this is my favorite fic I have read on this site. And I've read some really good ones!!
I really love that Shelly is built like a Sandro Botticelli painting. I see her having the natural (and currently out of style) beauty and a slight pagan aura like in 'The Birth of Venus,' which was what you were intending, I'm sure. :)
In the first few chapters, I was thinking, "Oh, great. This is one of those stories where the virgin just falls into bed with the main character(s)." *yawn* Been there and have the t-shirt. But then you gave a vaild reason why she was soo intensely sexually attracted to these two, er.., 'men' Well, done. This is different than anything I've read before!
I've also been searching a while now for a fic that does f/m/m in a tasteful and believable way. (Look up 'The Nomads of Trilos',that's a good f/m/m; but you've probably have already read it since you've mentioned Scary Bear Hair.) What I was looking for was one woman falling in love/lust with two guys and hopefully getting them both into bed with her *naughy grin* But TASTEFULLY! You haven't quite gotten to the good solid smut yet, but I'm enjoying the teasing, er... I mean the waiting. :P I prefer my stories with some good plot and juxtaposition! (not to mention good grammar!)
Speaking of juxtaposition: Hunter and Conrad. *fans herself* What a couple of hotties! Well, not hotties, they're a bit too dark to be called that, but they sure are some sensual dudes. The only part I didn't like was with Shelly and Hunter after Conrad was 'with' her. The smut what fine (dandy even!), but I didn't like how he called her a 'whore' and 'slut'; it seemed a little out of character for him. But I can reason out why he would say those things.
I'm also not really digging the one year gap in the story. Maybe you could do a couple of oneshots to show what happened to Shelly and what happend to Conrad and Hunter? Just a thought.
I sincerly hope that you will continue with this story! For now, I am off to read "Maid to Lust" Tata!

~L

Wow!! What a story! This was real find for me. I expected it to be the usual fare of girl gets kidnapped, then falls for kidnapper due to his excessive sex appeal. Kidnapper then falls for girl - the end. However, your story is very original with a lot of twists and turns so that you are never sure what is coming next. I love it! I have not reviewed before this as I have just read it for the first time in one sitting. Please do finish this as I am longing to know how you mean to complete this and what is going to happen to each of the characters along the way.
PS I like Hunter best but I have always been a sucker for the strong tormented type, plus I've always thought Fey characters are very sexy!!

or is it just writers block?

shortest chapter yet. but still good

best chapter yet! where do you come up with the inspirations for the court and politics?

a ‘review response’ section would be awesome not that I leave long indepth reviews... Im just too stunned by your amazing writing to speak!

that was amazing