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The statue of David was done by Michelangelo during the 1500s. Also, Classical Greek and Roman art was made before Early Christianity (200-500AD) so none of the subject matter depicted in their art had anything to do with Old Testament. If you're going to reference famous artwork, at least wiki it, research, or something. It's not that hard. Anyway, liked the work so far. Keep going! ^^

Thank you above reviewer. You caught one of the mistakes I have made throughout the story. I apologize, at the time in my Humanities course we happened to be studying both eras in order to show the true "rebirth" of the classics, and how mankind emerged out of the dark ages with help from Greco Roman influence found in Italy. When studying these two in tight correlation, I merely misspoke or "mis-wrote" lol.

And while I appreciate your concern (for this shows that you pay attention and I appreciate that), the tone perhaps, of your remark; the simple presumption that I did not know my material put me off by your comment. I am well educated, though to err is to be human. I am very human. But perhaps a nicer placement of words could have been afforded on your part.

However, I do not believe your intentions to be anything but helpful. So again I thank you for pointing out a slight mix-up I made. It will be corrected with due regards to your helpful insight. :D

Thank You,

-The Author

awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1update soon pleeeeeaaaaassssssseeeee!!!

OMG... good lord almighty.. i stopped breathing for a sec while i was reading this like I held my breath.. wow.... im in love with this story Please do another chapter quickly (if you can) I wanna marry this story.. Eeek i wanna read more..

Wow. And here I thought that Conrad was just going to throw her to the fey. UPDATE SOON! So much suspense.

can't wait till you update alsome story

i LOVE this story!
and that chapter was so fucking hot!
keep posting!

Awesome chapter! This story just keeps getting better and better! Update realllllllllllly soon please!

Oh my Gods. I love this story sooooo much. Please continue. Please, please, please. Thank you Noonie

Okay, this chapter takes the cake! I loooove it to death! Forget if I said anything bad about Conrad, he's amazing! He's got to be the hottest vampire I've read of in this entire site. Fo' sho'. You should think of being, like, I dunno, a REAL author, like Christine Feehan. I like her work, and your alot like her in some wasy. So, right now, you're my favorite author right now, and Ima bout to go sign up at the Forum so I can go do this "testify about it" thingy. Wanna meet up and see if thers other fans like me. so see ya! :) UPDATE UPDATE!!!!