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December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That just came out of nowhere, I mean, I knew it was going to happen. I just didn't think it would happen that fast or randomly. Conrad will not be happy! I absolutely love this story, keep up the great work and update soon.
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December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
to be honest.... this was amazing! im completely hooked on this one! I absolutly adore her and Hunter, ah I cant wait to see what happens!
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December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ARGH!!
OMG!!
Guh...
(etc)
Lol!
I seriously love this story!! PLEASE update soon because this is killing me!!
I've been waiting for Hunter to FINALLY rip Shelly's clothes off and you stop it there! *cries*
*sigh* Hunter is so hot! :D
Lol Sorry - abit over-excited, but hey, it's the sign of a brilliant writer.
S
xxx
OMG!!
Guh...
(etc)
Lol!
I seriously love this story!! PLEASE update soon because this is killing me!!
I've been waiting for Hunter to FINALLY rip Shelly's clothes off and you stop it there! *cries*
*sigh* Hunter is so hot! :D
Lol Sorry - abit over-excited, but hey, it's the sign of a brilliant writer.
S
xxx
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December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Must know more!! UPDATE SOON!!! Awesome chapter...Hunter is the best.
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December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I have never actually "reviewed" anyone's stories before so forgive me if I don't do this right. But please come back and write some more. I am absolutely hooked on this story!! It seems like everytime I finish a chapter I am left with a breath caught in my throat wondering what will happen next. Definitely a good read. I love that Shelly has a mouth on her and isn't some skrawny damsel in distress type. Keep up the good work and please, please write more very soon!!!
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December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Alright, so LOVE the prose style. Your work's really amazing, to say the least. I love how you describe the characters, so detailed! This is sure to be a hit around AFF. I wouldn't be surprised if it becomes one of the most popular. You may be new, but you've got that flare about you. Good Luck.
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December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it - things are just so much hotter when they're with Hunter. He's finally showing his desire. And here I thought that vampire's bites just made anyone and everyone go crazy with lust, but really there's something more to it. I like how Hunter didn't even have to bite her though in order for her to want him so badly.
Thanks for the quick update!
Thanks for the quick update!
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December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
your description of her was amazing!
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December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please please don't be too long before another update. This is EXCELLENT! :)
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December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow!