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December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story! This chapter has made this story even more interesting by adding some more to the plot. I think this was my favorite chapter so far! Well, I don't know how to make this review any longer, but I hope it is long enough to make you write another chapter soon!
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December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay another chapter well done. This just keeps getting better and better, I hope she comes out not to be human that would make things more fun then ever. Keep up the good work hun. I cant read what you have to write next.
Your a truly Spectacular Writer. Keep up the awesome work. And write with lightening. Speed.
Your a truly Spectacular Writer. Keep up the awesome work. And write with lightening. Speed.
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December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
damn girl!
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December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
what color were the other vampire's eyes?
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December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing, i just starte reading it and couldnt stop till i was all the way through. The way you express the inner thoughts of the characters is interesting it makes the reader feel more connected to the characters on an emotional level. The sex scenes are excelent they deffinately turn me on, and most importantly of all the plot is interesting and original, lots of fun to read appretiate it if you write more.
Buny
Buny
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December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
definately went out with a bang... why did Conrad let the starving vampire have part of his collection the first night?
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December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Omg! That was awesome. I love this story, Conrad is going to be so pissed when he finds out
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December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
grr...I HATE Ccccccclllllllliffffffffffffffsssssssssss!!! it makes me want to jump off one for that lol. Okay not really, but yes YES!! thank you Hunter for coming and doing that, don't get me wrong..Vampires are up there on Sexy for me..but Hunter...he takes the cake lol...well in this case the girl. so yes here is my new review i guess you could call it, or more like a plea for you to update again? if it wouldn't be too much to ask? btw loved the twist there about who or what she is, nicely played.
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December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, I really loved that!!!!!!!!!
Please continue writing!
Please continue writing!
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December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
God, I love this story, I've loved this story for many a moon.
You've got such a rich texture to your words, its like I can feel them.
Really, this is rather exquisite, I do love it.
Amazing person.
You've got such a rich texture to your words, its like I can feel them.
Really, this is rather exquisite, I do love it.
Amazing person.