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DUDE! when I got back the first thing i did was check to see if you had updated...and I would of reviewed then but I promptly fell asleep afterwards but man oh man these have been great chapters. HOW ON EARTH WILL SHE CHOOSE. i mean...damn. Anyhow. this chapter was awesome. the only slight critique I have is that when you were describing the royal guard you might of gotten a little too purple patch(y). The description is good, but its a bit overdone... maybe take out a few adjectives or the rainfall part. I actually went through and read this chapter twice to make sure I didn't miss anything heh and cuz its so good. I really like how you are constantly adding new facets to the story. How its not just some trite triangular love story. I am waiting with bated breath for the next installment so please don't take too long!!!!!!! heh im'a go read it again now...peace.

so...i'm going to review again....because I saw how long it had been and you deserve two reviews...if not more...and some cookies. sooo since its too difficult to give you a cookie: heres another review :D!!! the dynamic between hunter is fantastic because its been building since the beginning, Conrad is just a little sudden. I mean I'm all for hearing about his steamy manliness but she seems like the type that would need more time with a person to determine 'fatal attraction'. on another note.... while I would LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE to read a f/m/m with these three characters I'm a bit skeptic that they would actually do this. and believe me its hurting to say this because i want to read that so badly. but hunter and Conrad are way too proud and stubborn to actually share in that type of situation. they would both try to be the alpha and since they are too dominant i don't think it would work. it just doesn't fit their personalities and mannerisms. HOWEVER. if you do take this bit of advice to heart...could you please write the scene and post it as a side story because I think i might just love you forever...i mean i REALLY would love to read that...as i'm sure all your readers would. it would be the perfect compromise heh. and be hot as hell.

I'm kinda sorta new here and your story is the first I have read on this site...And I'm addicted. I haven't even read chapter 6 yet, and I'm addicted. I LOVE THIS STORY. I LOVE YOU. KEEP UPDATING O_O

I already know I'll be checking this story every day to see if you have updated xD

OMG

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-CelticKnot-

OH MY FUCKING GOD> UPDATE NOW> I APLOGIZE FOIR BAD GRAMMAR AN PUNCUATION>

YOU HAVE TO FUCKING UPDATE

UPDATE

PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF ALL THINGS SACRED AND HOLY AND SHINY

PLEASE

-panting- ok....im ok now...o-o...

seriously though....you NEED with a huge, gigantic N E E D, to update.

I'LL GIVE YOU MY FIRST BORN!

Ok...maybe not <.< >.>

Cuz my first born is standing behind me in all her 3 year old cuteness, asking where the cookies are hidden. >.<

(She always asks for sweet stuff when I'm readin xD Because I always say yes without thinking xDD)

I'LL BE BACK!!

-zooms away to daughter and magical Chewy cookies <33)

-CelticKnot-

This is so so so so incredibly well-written. I love your heroine, and the latest plot twist is delicious! Congratulations on a masterful story thus far. Can't wait for the next chapter...

Wonderfully written, a great storyline that speaks of a fantasy beyond compare. Please update soon : )

Wow, its getting better and better. I love this story so far. Can't wait for the next part

This is amazing... I really love the plot twist! Will they keep her at Conrad's mansion? Go with her? I don't know! please update soon!

Oooooo so hot!!
But...I just can't help but feel she should be with Hunter! I like Conrad but Hunter is much more sexier and so cute! :D Oh dear - I think I have a crush on a character... :S Lol!!
Still looking forward to the F/M/M though!! Hee!
Thanks for updating so quickly! :D
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I love your story a lot! But since the beginning I've been rooting for Hunter to be with her and ONLY Hunter. I wish you could make it that way but your the author and I support you decision. I will continue to review and read because I look forward to your story! Update soon!