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Oh wow, this story keeps getting better and better. Also thanks for your comments on Flaming Desire, i really appreciate it

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE UPDATE!!! -holding reward-

I'm glad my last review made you laugh! :D

I loved this chapter! EXCEPT....I WANT HER TO SEE THAT SEXY FEY MAN AGAIN!

Sexy sexy Faerie <333

Rar <333

xD

I can't wait until your next update!

W000!!

:D

~CelticKnot~

I can't help it, I want to see Hunter again!!! I liked him and wanted Shelia to end up with him, and yes everyone in Arizona is bi-polar, I live in Arizona, they are all a bunch of nut jobs. I guess I just called myself a nutjob.... I am not a native Arizonian, I AM immune.

I very much like your story so I'll try to have an open mind! Thanks so much for your wonderful story! Update soon!

Love the new chapter! Something tells me dear, sweet old grandma, hasn't explained everything... I can't wait to find out! Oh and by the way, I love your new story as well!

Sorry that you have but one review from me, thus far. I promise you that I have been reading ever faithfully and have just finished the tenth chapter. Stupid life always catches up with me, keeping me away from your most beautiful work. I will also check out the new story you are writting, and I look forward to the completion of your novel.

As for this particular story...

It seemed sudden that hunter frisked her on the car, since there wasn't much thought dialog. However, I enjoyed it just as well. I like how you write their thoughts out. You keep their thoughts and ideas fluttering quickly like how the real mind works.

I guess the million dollar question for the moment isn't who she ends up with, but rather who pops the cherry?

Faithfully still around.
- K

I love this story.

great chapter!!! More please!!

I'm all for F/M/M but at the same time, I think that Sheila's attractions towards Conrad is too sudden. Just a chapter ago, she absolutely despised him and wanted noting more than to escape him. Now she's supposedly feeling all of this sexual tension and attachment towards him. Hunter is more understandable because it's been building up this whole time, but the whole Conrad thing just doesn't really make much sense.

Were the two men at the end of the chapter Hunter and Conrad?

Oh my... I love this story. I just read it all, && I can't WAIT for chapter 10. It's so good.... I think you could go publish it when it's complete. Hell, I would! Very good. I think if it were a book, alot of people would buy it. I would buy it, even though I've read it. =) Simply put, it's all I can think about.