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I have to say that this story is coming out more well structured then your previous one, I'm loving your new characters. I can't wait to find out more about Con and Hunter, Shelia is going to be bring such changes to these realms

Yay! Oh sweet Jesus thank you! You have answered much for my tiny brain. Your well explained response has brought me joy. Very glad to see you have given Shelia the rebel streak. I am glad she does not want to be a princess of this scary realm. Your plot makes much more sense and I am happy to see improvements. Yay for you. I am a happy reader! Huzzah for hot immortals taking action for their fuck buddy. Oh. That came out wrong. Oh well. Lol. Good work my friend. 5 stars for this chapter. Much better improvement from chapter 10.

Your story is amazing. everything has been amazing so far. Even the switching back and forth between Hunter and Conrad. I'm a strong supporter of your ShellyxHunter relationship. Highly advise you lean more towards that or a threesome between Conrad, Shelly, and Hunter. But...I have to rant on you for a bit about the thing sI think you need to think on.

1. Every time things begin to get hot...you kind of stop them and that ruins things for me. I understand you're trying to inspire a kind of 'anticipation' and 'desire' thing here but seriously...FINISH WHAT YOU START. I've been waiting and reading through all 10 of your chapters waiting for Hunter and Shelly to fuck each other in a passionate sex romp of sin and desire and nothing! Not even anything leading towards a sex scene. A FULL BLOWN SEX SCENE. Even with Conrad! What the fuck are you doing here? (No offense, I'm just saying. I would like it if you made up your mind. GIVE ME MORE THAN JUST A FINGERING SCENE. Give me more than just a wanton desire scene where Shelly and Hunter have just barely gotten to the point of having sex and all ready ruin the mood/moment.

2. I've enjoyed your story thus far, but...the twist. where Shelly's a 'succubi' half-thing...It's gotta go. It's got to burn in the bowels of hell and never return. I hate your twist. With a passion. I understand it makes sense with the title but...I loathe it. I can['t stand it. You've ruined this for me. Oh my god. What are you thinking? Now Shelly will never have sex with sexy Conrad or irresistable Hunter ever now that you've basically had this old codgy 'Queen' psycho-bitch thinking Shelly's her granddaughter whne it's obvious to me...there's not a single ounce of relation.

Not even in the pit of my mind do I see where your plot is going and I hate it. I hate your twist. I want you to do something about that to make me a happy reader. Please. DO SOMETHING! Have Hunter and Conrad team up and go rescue her! They both know they want her, the beautiful dumbasses, but make them take action! Don't have them stand there with their hand son her like a bunch of sad-little-depressed-'oh she's going to have to leave us'-goons!

What the hell?! MAKE ME HAPPY! Please...Oh please fix this story for me. I love it. It's an awe inspiring harlequin for God's sakes. BUT FIX THESE THINGS FOR ME!

I will love you forever. Please...

Sincerely,

The Mad Hatter.

Mistress of Teacups and Harlequin Hooligans.

Darn it why did she have to be taken away from them just when it was getting fun. I like the fey guy. I feel like Lord Whats-his-name just wants to possess Ophelia still. Can't wait to see what happens when more suitors come into play.

Love this fic! UPDATE SOON!

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:) please?

So I came into this story a bit differently than others might have. I read "Maid to Lust" first, then decided to read "Noble Blood" because of how much I liked it. I certainly wasn't disappointed! ^_^ Gah... now I'm just desperately waiting for an update - will Conrad, Hunter, and Shelly get back together again? Will Shelly become Queen or not? Cliffhangers are EVIL. XD I will be avidly checking back in for an update!

I love your story. Though I must admit, for a second there... only a second it was kind of reminding me of "House of Alex" I can't remember who wrote that, but it's on AFF somewhere. Anyway, your story is awesome. I'm loving all the mystery and especially the characters. I really like Hunter for some reason. Anyway, update soon. You have become an instant fave with both your stories. Keep writing.

Your stories make me swoon. Seriously. I want to snuggle to my computer and dream about your world (weird, but that's how I really feel right now O_o).

Please update!

OMG, this has got to be one of the funniest things I've ever read in a while ^_^ I'm really enjoying reading your story, makes me giggle...

Lovely lovely lovely!!! :D Please update again soon.

The two new chpaters since i last reviewed were amazing sorry for not reviewing very quickly but i absolutely love both new chapters, keep writing to support my addiction to your story